Cain be honest.
You can imagine it, and did while you read it...
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- Tue Sep 17, 2024 12:38 pm
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- Sat Dec 07, 2024 3:05 pm
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The Girls Just Want to Have Fun at the birthday pool party
PART 1 Michael stared at the invitation in his trembling hands. It was for Anna's birthday party. His heart fluttered at the sight of her name scribbled in glittering ink. She was the prettiest girl in school, and the fact that she had invited him was nothing short of a miracle. Anna was an angelic...
- Wed Dec 11, 2024 8:27 am
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Re: The Girls Just Want to Have Fun at the birthday pool party
PART 2 As he approached the pool, They whispered and giggled, their eyes raking over his body, and Michael felt his cheeks burn even hotter under their scrutiny. They sized him up, building anticipation on the precarious situation of his swim trunks. The tension grew as the realization set in that ...
- Sun Dec 15, 2024 7:37 pm
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Re: The Girls Just Want to Have Fun at the birthday pool party
PART 3 The girls forced him out of the pool with gentle yet firm hands and teasing nudges, their eyes never leaving the precarious situation of his trunks as he tried to keep them from falling down. They guided him towards the flagpole standing proudly at the edge of the lawn, their giggles and whi...
- Sat Jan 04, 2025 2:57 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool
Brilliant start to a very promising scenario. Since it's in the ENM section, I'm assuming it will involve Cam being naked for girls to see? Hopefully I'm right.
- Sat Jan 04, 2025 3:34 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool
I like how this is starting.
I also like this section:
BareB4U wrote: ...some of the older teen boys were yummy to look at, and there were always the dreamy lifeguards.
I hope that leads to something in this story as well... or perhaps a spinoff.
I also like this section:
BareB4U wrote: ...some of the older teen boys were yummy to look at, and there were always the dreamy lifeguards.
I hope that leads to something in this story as well... or perhaps a spinoff.
- Sat Jan 04, 2025 4:00 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool
Great start! Keep it up.
- Wed Jan 08, 2025 11:30 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 2 - 08 Jan)
Loving this, Bare! This is my kinda story
- Thu Jan 09, 2025 2:48 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 2 - 08 Jan)
Another great chapter!
- Thu Jan 09, 2025 12:16 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 2 - 08 Jan)
The story is great, but this second chapter was a bit difficult to follow at times. There are numerous uses of HE and SHE, but it's not always immediately obvious who each HE or She is. I had to read some parts more than once. Using names in the first sentence of each new paragraph would help clarif...