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- Mon Oct 14, 2024 1:55 am
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Stripped to the Core 5D 11/30
Stripped to the Core Chapter 1: Stripped Bare The sun barely kissed the horizon as I trudged through the towering metal gates of Pine Valley High. It was only the second week of the semester, but the long bus ride still left a knot in my stomach. No matter how many times I made the trip, it felt the...
- Mon Oct 14, 2024 7:51 pm
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Re: Stripped to the Core
So, her clothes boxed up by her parents and given to charity; Seems that she will be an art piece even when home with her parents and siblings!
Quite a bit of potential to explore, more than just an embarrassed nude model for a life drawing class.
Quite a bit of potential to explore, more than just an embarrassed nude model for a life drawing class.
- Mon Oct 14, 2024 10:10 pm
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Chapter 2: The Trophy Hallway
Chapter 2: The Trophy Hallway I was relieved to be leaving the principal’s office still fully dressed, but the weight of what had just been decided was crushing me. As I stepped into the hallway, I could already feel the stares burning into me. My hands shook uncontrollably, and I tried to hold myse...
- Tue Oct 15, 2024 5:58 am
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Re: Stripped to the Core
I'm guessing since what was left of the clothes after they were cut off were tossed in the trash, her sneakers and socks were tossed too. Also since her parents are boxing up and donating all her clothes, this probably will be going on for more than just the school year, since she will have no cloth...
- Tue Oct 15, 2024 6:34 am
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Re: Stripped to the Core
Excellent beginning. You tell a good story. Please continue.
- Tue Oct 15, 2024 12:12 pm
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Re: Stripped to the Core
Maybe other students could be subject to different insecurities (like the kid with the lisp being made to do public speaking), but of course none as drastic as Emma). Perhaps Emma somehow ropes Ms. Amberley into also getting naked. Or flubs the next assignment on purpose out of protest for her condi...
- Thu Oct 17, 2024 7:25 pm
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Re: Stripped to the Core
Love this story so far! I hope the classmates will slowly start pushing the line to force her to do embarrassing things and to also write things on her that make her feel more humiliates instead of ‘brave’. Maybe they convince the teacher the ‘canvas’ should be in a certain (embarrassing for Emma) p...
- Sun Oct 20, 2024 4:25 am
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Re: Stripped to the Core
I must concur, both that it is a great story and that, from the moment I heard her long hair described, I thought this story should really involve her losing it. Maybe not all of it, but cut short so she can't cover herself with it at all. And of course, certain other hair might be hiding something...
- Sun Oct 20, 2024 5:04 am
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Chapter 3: The Weight of Words
Mrs. Blunderbuss raised her hand, commanding the attention of the students gathered at the hallway junction. It was a busy, open area where several corridors converged, with students milling about between classes, some leaning against lockers, others lingering by the water fountains. But now, all ey...
- Sun Oct 20, 2024 4:29 pm
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Re: Stripped to the Core New 10/19
This is an excellent story and deserving of accolades. I'm not sure why a world-renowned artist would be teaching high school art class, or how a girl who is so shy that she can't even shower alone without a swimsuit would be that swayed by the threat of expulsion. But the story has a solid theme an...