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by Revengedpirate
Thu Apr 15, 2021 3:34 pm
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Re: Insert of Julie’s Babysitting Disaster

I’m not sure how many of the gaps you are going to fill, but if there all like this it’s fantastic
by Revengedpirate
Sat Apr 17, 2021 9:37 am
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Greta goes green new story

“Mum you need to be more green, and help our planet. See our plastic bottles need to be recycled, and these cans need to go in aluminium.” Said Greta. “Greta I’m not doing extra work, now go to school.” Said Malena. “But mum, everyone needs to do their bit for the environment.” Said Greta. “Ok you w...
by Revengedpirate
Fri May 14, 2021 1:08 am
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Re: Insert for Julie’s Babysitting Disaster - Julie returns from the shops.

It’s a great bit of writing, even with the continuity errors. I knew Agathas legs would be outside the vehicle with her sitting on the back seat. The problem being Julie across her lap would either be head butting the door or her bum against it. Either way the door would be in the way, of Julie bein...
by Revengedpirate
Thu Jun 03, 2021 10:20 am
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Re: Collaboration Challenge (Paging all Authors)

PART 3 Just then a text message appeared on Mary’s phone. “Hannah18657 has dared you to shower in your clothes. You must take a picture when you are in the shower to prove you’ve done the dare. Once you’re dare is complete you can dare other people.” Mary looked at the message. She laughed to hersel...
by Revengedpirate
Sun Jun 13, 2021 10:23 pm
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Bad post (3 parts available)

On Friday night, Vicky went to the party. It was absolutely wild, and she ended up going off with some guy back to his dormitory. On Saturday morning she did the walk of shame back to her dormitory before collapsing on the bed and sleeping. Saturday afternoon she lazily chilled with her roommates be...
by Revengedpirate
Sun Jun 13, 2021 11:58 pm
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Re: Bad post part 2

“Dearest Victoria, I see you’ve been waxed and had a nappy put on. I’m glad you’re doing as you’re told now for your next tasks. Number 19 go back into the laundrette and put your clothes in the dryer. Number 20 when the dryer stops put your clothes back on if they haven’t shrunk. Number 21 once you...
by Revengedpirate
Sat Jun 19, 2021 12:16 pm
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Re: The Promotion

Dear rawr112, if you have read this board from cover to cover, you will notice that I have indeed written stories on this board more then once. I am well aware that the board deals in fantasy and fiction, but stories must have some parts that are plausible too. I’ve been criticised a few times for n...
by Revengedpirate
Sun Jun 20, 2021 6:05 pm
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Re: Haircuts

If you made it a contest people would write them
by Revengedpirate
Fri Jul 09, 2021 10:46 pm
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Re: [Questionable] I ripped off her skirt

It was short but great for a first try well written easy to read can’t wait for you to write more stories
by Revengedpirate
Thu Aug 05, 2021 9:08 pm
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Punished for Making fun of younger brother (part 2 Available)

My name is Michelle, I’m 15 years old, brown hair with freckles. I have green eyes, I’m 4 feet 9 inches tall, skinny, unfortunately I’m not quite developed yet, my chest still barely fits an A cup bra, so I tend to buy C Cups and stuff them. My pubes haven’t started growing yet either. The doctor sa...