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by Emily
Tue Sep 03, 2024 8:39 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/02)

Love all of these fun ideas! Please keep them coming!
by Emily
Tue Sep 03, 2024 10:56 pm
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Chapter 34 Riley nodded, grateful for the reprieve, and swam over to the side of the pool, her legs feeling like jelly. Lily followed, and they both sank onto the cool tiles, the heat of the sun a stark contrast to the chilly water. They sat there for a moment, their bodies glistening with droplets...
by edithdick
Tue Sep 03, 2024 11:24 pm
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Re: Any ENF stories where the main girl is mute?

As you by now, I'm a fan of trauma and just the whole mental health side of fiction, (Annie certainly has trauma from what happened to her in Extreme Therapy) outside of, as well as within erotic literature. I'm also a huge fan of submissive female protagonists in these stories, and so far there se...
by edithdick
Thu Sep 05, 2024 11:41 pm
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 19 Posted (Sept 1st)

Ok, so I've started reading More Therapy and I'm currently on chapter 3. So far I'm really enjoying it. There's a lot that I like and one or two things I'd change. I really like how Annie acts like she is vulnerable and traumatised, because well, she absolutely has been traumatised. I like how her ...
by edithdick
Sat Sep 07, 2024 8:08 pm
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Re: Any ENF stories where the main girl is mute?

So glad that if nothing else, this thread played some part in helping a writer, even if just a bit. ☺ At this point I think it’s been concluded to myself that I’m going to write this story once More Therapy is closed out. I’ve noodled around in my head about the tone and flow of this story and at l...
by neverdoubted
Sun Sep 08, 2024 6:09 pm
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The Last Straw - Chapter 10

When I happily reported that our trip to the hardware store could go ahead as planned, Mary said nothing and mostly just stared back at me with a mixture between dread and terror. Since it meant she would be taking a nude walk through the middle of a strange town, I suppose I can forgive her for not...
by Emily
Tue Sep 10, 2024 8:23 pm
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Chapter 35 Riley lay back, her eyes squeezed shut as the sun kissed her skin, feeling the warmth spread through her body. She was acutely aware of every inch of herself that was on display, the way her nipples tightened and her pussy grew slick with desire. Lily's voice was a soft whisper beside he...
by Emily
Tue Sep 10, 2024 8:46 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)

Bucket wrote: Tue Sep 10, 2024 8:39 pm Thank you so much once again for the constant stream of new chapters! It's so wonderful getting such astonishing chapters so often! Will read chapter 33, 34 and 35 towards the end of the week.
I cannot wait to hear your thoughts on them! :)
by Emily
Fri Sep 13, 2024 2:05 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/10)

Review(s) of the latest chapters incoming tomorrow. Fair warning: It's astronomically large, as well as mammothly enormous. I've read most of it, but annoyingly, I didn't have the time I thought I would to read it all. Will finish on the morrow. As it's quite...elaborate, would it be preferable to ...
by edithdick
Sat Sep 14, 2024 8:09 pm
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 19 Posted (Sept 1st)

... The only thing I sort of... not disliked, but kind of wasn't really feeling was when Sophie started talking. It almost made her feel like Scooby Doo. You seemingly have retconned that? If so, I prefer that you've removed that. It almost made her feel like she was mentally handicapped rather tha...