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Chapter 3 (Continued)

"You look tired, Marisa, why don't you have a seat?"

Riley gently sat Marisa down on the soft sofa in the living room. He sat down next to her. She looked at him, still blushing intensely at being naked, unable to cover herself up, gagged and bound.

"This is a little ...

Well, that's not very encouraging.

your early notes were spotty at best

It's funny you should say that. I am actually a really obsessive note-taker. That's part of my problem. Very often, when I do find time to write at all, I wind up spending so much time making notes and plans for a story that ...

I'm grateful that people are interested enough in my story to be guessing where it's going. I don't want to give away the plotline in advance, but I like to drop hints. A number of people have picked up on the foreshadowing in the chapters I've posted so far.

In my original draft, when Mr. Barlowe ...

Miss Lovelace is exactly the kind of story I visit this forum for!

Excellent!

I saw your stories on Sue page, but couldn’t comment there. So I’m happy to see you here as well.
I really love your stories, great build up, great character descriptions.
The story of miss Lovelace really need a follow up. Looking forward to all your coming stories!

The story of miss Lovelace really need a follow up.

We didn't really write any of these stories with an eye toward continuing them later. But since writing a sequel was first suggested to us, we have been brainstorming some ideas for it, like this :


"Uh, it was a long time ago, Lily," said Mr ...

Josh, your stories are a great read! :)

Stories like "Miss Lovelace" are why I come to this site. Some spanking, humiliation, bondage, nudity; it has it all. The "unfairness" of the humiliation is a strong feature, making your story particularly hot. ;)

I see Sue's influence in your work, and ...

I've only read Mrs Lovelace so far but I really loved it! Its exactly the type of unfair treatment towards girls that I really really enjoy! Mrs Lovelace is a great character, her attitude towards girls is perfect. Saying that it shouldn't be a big deal if a boy peeps on them, great stuff! I love ...

All great stories! I agree that the school story, Mrs Lovelace, has great potential and deserves a continuation if possible!

Would love to see what happens to the girls and how the various dynamics there develop.

As others have already said, Mrs Lovelace story is a really good premise (Only had the opportunity to read that one so far too). I really liked the misdirection of it looking like the boys were going to be punished, but then it being the girls getting spanked. I'll comment more once I get a chance ...