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by Themarble
Tue Oct 17, 2023 12:43 pm
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Re: It's In the Script

Looks like it is nearly time for the scene we have all been looking forward to! I can't wait to see what you have been brewing for this. I hope Mrs Ginger calls in that favour soon, hopefully it is extra embarrassing. I like we are keeping stian dolphin smooth. Hopefully we get a swimming scene with...
by Themarble
Thu Oct 19, 2023 11:59 pm
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Re: It's In the Script

Like Trundle above me, I am also very curious. This feels like a turning point chapter. Either things stop here, which we can guess they won't, or things are about to be out of Stians control entirely, and that is exciting. His confidence in his own control has expanded and it needs to deflate. I wo...
by Themarble
Fri Oct 20, 2023 1:55 pm
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Re: It's In the Script

Oh man Stian couldn't get the real reason out. The poor boy was embarrassed. Will it be worth the embarrassment just minutes away? You boys normally don't think things through before they decide. It was easier to ignore it now, but later? No chance.
by Themarble
Thu Nov 02, 2023 4:54 pm
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Re: Halloween Horrors: Story two, The Marble Statue_ New 11/02

This story continues to expand and I love it. The truth or dare game continuing is amazing and there is so much left as you said. Even if it is not halloween, I can't wait to see what spooky things are still in store with this story.
by Themarble
Sat Nov 11, 2023 6:20 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 11/3)

I appreciate comments like this so much more than the "thank" feature. The thanks are fine, but can't replace actual, nuanced feedback which has the ability to spawn meaningful discussions. As for the new story ideas, I'm legitimately excited about all of them. I've already written a deta...
by Themarble
Sat Nov 11, 2023 7:40 pm
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Re: Halloween Horrors: Story two, The Marble Statue_ New 11/11

This chapter was amazing, these old witches definitely are going to start to add more and more humiliation to this poor boys life.

His dick being longer than the pistol barrel was a very nice touch, and the bounce too. This story has been amazing TeenFan and I love that it still carries on.
by Themarble
Sun Nov 12, 2023 10:32 am
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Re: Halloween Horrors: Story two, The Marble Statue_Two new chapters 11/11

Damn, Leopold really shot the sheriff? Will there be need for a detective case? Perhaps an inspection of the weaponry used? A good cop bad cop situation with Leopold? Who could interrogate?
by Themarble
Mon Nov 13, 2023 4:54 pm
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Re: Halloween Horrors: Story two, The Marble Statue_ New 11/13

A mud man!!! This chapter was perfection. Others thinking his boner was just a prop and quickly realising it wasn't is amazing. Leopold really made a mess but luckily no one really saw it coming out. I wonder if he will be so lucky next time. Will he get a hose wash or will he remain the mud man til...
by Themarble
Mon Nov 20, 2023 2:03 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 11/16)

You're welcome, but I disagree on your analysis about mission creep. Dare Me was always intended to be a rich, full, epically long tale. As far as I'm concerned, it's right on schedule. That said, there is an ever-present risk of plot lulls and getting too predictable (most people can probably gues...
by Themarble
Thu Nov 23, 2023 2:39 pm
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Re: The Initiation Ordeal_New Nov 23

I'm super glad this story is back, how did Kai orgasm? I can't wait to find out? Was he a naughty boy and did it in the pool? I can imagine it includes a lot of touching.