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- Tue Nov 28, 2023 10:33 pm
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Jeannie's Laptop Disaster
JEANNIE’S LAPTOP DISASTER By Little Robbie My alarm sounds at 7am, and I am startled out of a deep sleep. It takes a few seconds for the fog to clear. I’m Jeannie and I’m nearing the end of my second semester at Southern Nevada State University. I am behind in completing my final research paper for ...
- Sun Jan 14, 2024 2:12 am
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The Blinds - Update 9/19/24 - Caught Naked
Hello! I’m a long time lurker and first time writer. I have never written anything outside of school in my life. I have a lot of ideas for this story, but before I continue I was hoping for some feedback in terms of the writing. Is it easy enough to follow? I had no idea writing characters talking b...
- Sun Jan 14, 2024 7:51 pm
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Re: The Blinds
Thank you all so much for the feedback, I took your suggestions and added italics for the text conversation and made it clear she was in highschool. I hope you all like chapter 2, I had fun writing it. Please continue giving feedback on the writing, I thrive on both positive and negative feedback. T...
- Fri Jan 19, 2024 2:14 am
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Re: The Blinds
I know this chapter is pretty tame with a lot of set up, I promise it ramps up soon, thanks again for all your messages and thumbs ups! Chapter 3 – The Walk Emma closed her door and collapsed onto the ground, absolutely drenched in both water and sweat. “I cannot believe I just did that,” she whispe...
- Sat Jan 27, 2024 4:51 am
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Chapters 4 & 5. 1/27/24
Chapter 4 - The pool Emma awoke the next morning to her father knocking on her door. Groaning when she heard the noise, unable to believe she was already awake. Her late-night escapades were still fresh in her mind, “I could swear I fell asleep 10 seconds ago,” she thought through the morning haze. ...
- Sat Jan 27, 2024 5:00 am
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Re: The Blinds - update chapters 4 & 5. 1/27/24
Chapter 5 - Beauty Sleep When Emma walked into the house the first thing she did was make a cup of coffee. Her parent’s looked at her like she was crazy, “You’re having coffee at 6pm? You’ll be up all night!” her mother said. “You have no idea,” mumbled Emma under her breath. “The sun took more out ...
- Sat Mar 09, 2024 11:07 pm
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Update - 3/9/24 - School Bus Strip
Chapter 6 - School Bus Strip After a long, hot soak in the tub, Emma began to relax and clear her mind of the craziest few hours of her life. She walked into her room and collapsed on the bed, falling asleep within seconds. Emma was startled awake as someone was shaking her saying, “Emma wake up alr...
- Sat Mar 30, 2024 12:42 am
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued
Chapter 7 It was a bright, sunny morning as Emma walked to the bus stop on her second day of school, but to her it felt as if a bleak, dark cloud was overhead. She spent most of the walk trying to guess what her tormentor, Claire, had in store for her while reliving the previous day’s activities. “I...
- Wed Apr 24, 2024 10:31 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 4/24/24 - Naked in School
Chapter 8 The next couple of weeks continued with Emma getting naked each morning and afternoon on the bus. After the water bottle event (BottleGate) caused Emma to have an intense public orgasm, Claire added a stipulation that Emma was required to have an orgasm every bus ride. Luckily for Emma, as...
- Fri May 17, 2024 1:45 pm
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