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by perseus
Thu Oct 19, 2023 1:45 am
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Lia's new reality part 2

The last couple of weeks of school were uneventful for Lia. She was doing her best to not get into any more trouble. Every night at 7pm she was made to strip naked in the living room, in front of her whole family, and stay that way until the morning. Lia would eat dinner naked and then retreat to ...
by perseus
Thu Oct 19, 2023 2:50 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)

I like the way you all think! Some of these ideas pretty close to what I have planned. I will say that the nature of Lia's punishment is going to change quite a bit. Not in a way Lia is going to like :D
by perseus
Tue Oct 24, 2023 6:17 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)


A fun chapter 2.

I think the poor girl needs therapy, myself.

Therapy is...
Useful for a DA: Therapist are duty bound to keep secrets, and would end their career by losing their license if they let one get out
Useful for a young exhibitionist: She can learn what the word means and get a grip on ...
by student
Tue Oct 24, 2023 9:45 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)

Therapy is an opportunity to have Lia embrace nudism. She's already a secret exhibitionist (got drunk and danced topless at the frat party) but she was hesitant and needed to have her inhibitions removed. Now Lia is SUPPOSEDED to exhibit her nude body at home--and possibly other places. A therapist ...
by perseus
Wed Oct 25, 2023 12:40 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)


Therapy is an opportunity to have Lia embrace nudism. She's already a secret exhibitionist (got drunk and danced topless at the frat party) but she was hesitant and needed to have her inhibitions removed. Now Lia is SUPPOSEDED to exhibit her nude body at home--and possibly other places. A ...
by perseus
Wed Oct 25, 2023 12:43 am
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Lia's new reality part 3

Lia couldn't believe what she had just done. She had just been caught doing her most intimate and private act by her parents! Now she was regretting not fighting Stacy and Kyle harder when they asked her to masturbate. In fact, she put up no resistance to them at all!

Her senses had once again ...
by perseus
Wed Oct 25, 2023 6:12 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)


So far, enjoyable.

Chapter One--Lia falls down the rabbit hole head. first.

Chapter Two, while inside the rabbit hole she encounters a bigger, deeper hole.

Chapter Three, there's a third rabbit hole in the second rabbit hole and this one is a briar patch!

Deeper and deeper. Waiting for the ...
by perseus
Thu Oct 26, 2023 12:40 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)


Silly questions:

Is Lia on The Pill?

Is Lia's lack of impulse control worrisome enough to seek evaluation by a mental health care professional?

Did Lia have any friends other than the gruesome twosome who were exploiting Lia? Only three chapters but no mention of concerned friends visiting Lia ...
by perseus
Thu Oct 26, 2023 12:58 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)


Congratulations on a well written story with good pacing and relatable characters! I like how you are willing to let good scenes play out and not rushing them. Beyond my standard author advice to "use dialog sparingly", my only specific feedback would be very minor. Try to avoid overusing phrases ...
by perseus
Thu Oct 26, 2023 10:25 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)


THE APPLE DOESN'T FALL FAR FROM THE TREE. :shock: :evil:


Another great comment!
Again I'll be honest that I hadn't given too much thought to the origins of Lia's behavior, be it her rule breaking or her exhibitionist tendencies. My thought with my first story was to try it keep it as simple as ...