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My comments are not about disliking the story, just how the structure of writing could be better.

There are no paragraph breaks to separate different actions.
Multiple quotes from different characters are on the same line of script.
It all makes your story more difficult to read than it could be.

Very nice method of manipulation by the girls over the young males.
It had a realistic ending, with the two boys not being able to talk about what happened to them.
It seemed to me that Trent might have liked having his buddy give him a helping hand now n then.

I'm bumping this story because it concluded six weeks ago.

I know I'm not the only one hoping for something new. Please...Please...Pretty Please.

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 22. Perfecting the Pose

Now I am not the best drawer in my art class, not even close. But if I take my time and focus I can get things to look fairly realistic. I worked
on drawing Bradley, and I thought it was going fairly well. I only had to erase some lines to start ...

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 23. A Change in Who's in Charge


It actually took me a while to get my head to stop spinning. I had just witnessed my older brother getting a handjob from Delilah, up real
close I got to watch it. I was amazed at how Bradley's penis changed color. It went from being ...

Chapter 2: Getting The Press Pass

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Principal Martin sat back in his seat, frowning. Suzie Godwin had come into his office with a very serious claim. He didn’t blame Mr ...

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 24. Monkey Makes it Rain


I was nowhere near done applying the coats of color paint onto the portrait of my younger brother when Chad said he had to hop down from
the tree. He had been up there for longer than half an hour, and his stretched out legs must have been ...

In the meantime, I found a simple way to hide the posts you don’t want to see, using the ‘foe’ list.
If you click on the spammer’s profile, you can ‘add foe’ and it hides everything they post. Just for you though.

Steps that could be implemented.

Close new registration for 1-2 weeks.

New members can't post for 1 week. (could just be a few days)

New members have to like 5 posts (could be 10, 15, 20) before they can post.

Daily post limit, or hourly limit.

These are a bit extreme, and not brilliant, but ...

Only boy at the bullies party. by Sammy-Boy

Only boy at the bullies party.

My mother was good friends with Kerrie's Mother. Kerrie was an evil little cow and often her and her gang tormented boys and girls alike in our school. Anyway because of our mothers friendship I was forced to go to her ...