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by destroyer008
Wed Aug 14, 2024 6:49 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)

I like the idea of some kind of point system where the girls give her a point threshhold she needs to reach each day in order to avoid punishment. This point threshhold could increase over time and she could be awarded points for doing all kinds of things within the day.

Like, eating pussy of one ...
by destroyer008
Sun Aug 18, 2024 7:37 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/18)

Great episode! I'm thrilled to learn what happens next! :)
by destroyer008
Mon Aug 19, 2024 7:12 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 8/12)





Now, you asked for more suggestions. I personally think that later on in the story Riley's girlfriends should get some sort of monatery compensation for all their hard work. After all, they plan and organize all those nice tasks for Riley, so is the idea of maybe profiting off of it so far ...
by destroyer008
Sun Aug 25, 2024 7:41 am
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Re: The Antebellum School Project (Ch 3B added)

Well, of course she will need to pay back her new (old) owner somehow. She will certainly bring in a lot of money in a way or another. But first she needs to be trained before she can provide any services to anyone. I like the premise that everyone is on board (principal, sheriff, judge). I bet she ...
by destroyer008
Sun Aug 25, 2024 7:49 am
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Re: The Antebellum School Project (Ch 3B added)

To add to my prior post, I think there could be a slave codex, which our slave has to act on. Failing to do so would habe dire consequences, which could reach from a light spanking or a similar humiliation to a further loss of priviledges such as walking or talking or something simimar or even an ...
by destroyer008
Thu Aug 29, 2024 6:13 am
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Re: Girls don't need modesty: The Doctor Visit (Part 5 - 8/28) Complete!

I love the idea of the spiked cream. This could lead to a lot of humiliating situations. A sequel one day that explores the idea of girls don't need modesty at other places as well, like home, would be very appreciated. :mrgreen:
by destroyer008
Tue Sep 03, 2024 11:43 am
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Re: The Unraveling (New 9/02)

Making the two love birds fight against each other in order to keep what's left of their dignity was genius. Keep up the great work! :)

I'm sure Riley is eager to get that sweet release but I guess the girls want to keep her on edge for a bit longer. When she gets to orgasm eventually, Riley ...
by destroyer008
Thu Feb 20, 2025 8:32 am
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Re: The New Rules (Chapter 52 - February 18th, 2025)

I'd really wish this story would never end. It's one of my favourites and has still so much potential, even after over 50 chapters.

And I have to disagree about the pacing as you are one of only very few writers, who manage to fill that slow story progression with a lot of unique ideas and ...
by destroyer008
Fri Feb 21, 2025 4:08 pm
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Re: The Lairds (Chapter XI- 21/02/25)

I just read all the chapters in one go and I have to say you did a great job, especially for your first ever story.

I really liked the aspect of trying to push the boundaries bit by bit. I don't mind the taboo aspects of your story, quite the contrary. I like them the most. The naughtier, the ...