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This story can also be found here: https://chyoa.com/story/Naked-Ambition.56184 Melanie Jones wasn't sure what wasn't right about her life but deep down she knew she was unhappy. On the surface it looked like she was doing pretty well for herself. She had a well paid job, a loving boyfriend and a lo...

You have an amazing way with words in describing not only the raw emotions of your female characters when they are in embarrassing situations but your ability to capture the scenes when they are super-aroused or are being made to orgasm is SUPERB! You definitely have the gift, my friend. I can't wai...

Wow, another fantastic and exciting chapter! You've really outdone yourself with this one, Pers! 😁 Becca has already been seen naked by 4 boys from her school, and I have a feeling that you're just getting started. It seems like the entire school is at the clinic for physicals today. I love how Mrs ...

Chapter 7 Soon, Ellie set a tray of food down in front of them and took a seat as well. "I got us some chicken tenders, fries, and a couple of sodas. I hope that's okay." Riley nodded, still feeling a little self-conscious but trying to focus on the food. "It's all fine," she sa...

Chapter 3 "You missed a spot." Marisa scowled. "Sorry." Mr. Barlowe grinned. "Couldn't resist." Without taking her glaring eyes off the old man, Marisa wiped the spot he had been pointing to. "That's a good girl," said Mr. Barlowe, patting the girl affectiona...

Chapter 3 (Continued) "You look tired, Marisa, why don't you have a seat?" Riley gently sat Marisa down on the soft sofa in the living room. He sat down next to her. She looked at him, still blushing intensely at being naked, unable to cover herself up, gagged and bound. "This is a l...

It’s great to see the wonderful feedback so far! There will probably be at least a couple more chapters at the mall, any fun ideas as to what Ellie and Aria can do with Riley at the mall? maybe there is a play area in the shopping center, where you are not allowed to wear shoes, with a trampoline o...

I'm really positively surprised. :D I like how you give the characters depth and don't immediately drift completely into pornography. This in itself makes the entire plot more meaningful and you get more involved with the characters. I liked how you let Marisa and Mr. Barlowe show different sides of...

I'm grateful that people are interested enough in my story to be guessing where it's going. I don't want to give away the plotline in advance, but I like to drop hints. A number of people have picked up on the foreshadowing in the chapters I've posted so far. In my original draft, when Mr. Barlowe w...

This is not a story of my own, but rather of one of my more distant cousins. Basically, when he was 12, he went swimming with his sister and mother (who didn't swim) in a nearby river/canal . Being 12 years old, after he was done swimming his sister, his mother simply told him to take his shorts off...