Very good chapter and I love the storyline, but even after the reedit, there are some plot gaps.
Emma is declared to be hairless above the neck before the first clippers have touched her long hair.
Little things like that break my concentration as a reader. Having said that, please don't stop, I ...
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- Wed Oct 23, 2024 8:09 am
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- Thu Nov 21, 2024 7:58 am
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Re: Cunt Next Door
Hoping to see more of this, and that Erin's exposure won't be limited to inside Jim's house.
- Fri Jan 03, 2025 5:47 pm
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Re: The Ten Commandments of Michelle O’Dell the Irish Girl. Part Un (Part twelve now available)
A full Hollywood wax would be appropriate - babies do not have hair "down there".Revengedpirate wrote: Wed Jan 01, 2025 2:03 am Could use some ideas on what shops would either humiliate Michelle further, or bring Andrew and Joanne closer together. Any input or feedback right now would be greatly appreciated
- Wed Feb 19, 2025 6:24 pm
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Re: The New Girl Isn't Shy *COMPLETE* (Chapter 17 - posted 2/19/25)
Thank you so much for that whole story.
I, for one, hope there will be many more to follow.
I, for one, hope there will be many more to follow.
- Fri Feb 21, 2025 6:12 am
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Re: The Lairds (Chapter XI- 21/02/25)
Changes.
The Lairds Ch 11
The awaited holiday ended up putting a bit of a halt on the developing games. Jane insisted on everyone staying together and it wasn’t the taste of freedom that the three teens had hoped for. If anything, it set things back.
After Easter, Alex was snowed under with ...
The Lairds Ch 11
The awaited holiday ended up putting a bit of a halt on the developing games. Jane insisted on everyone staying together and it wasn’t the taste of freedom that the three teens had hoped for. If anything, it set things back.
After Easter, Alex was snowed under with ...
- Mon Feb 24, 2025 1:07 pm
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Re: The Lairds (Chapter XII- 24/02/25)
Chapter XII
As they disembarked from the bus at the bottom of their road, a small white van pulled away from their house and they saw their mother’s car on the drive. They looked at each other quizzically, but as neither had any idea what it was, remained silent and continued in to the house ...
As they disembarked from the bus at the bottom of their road, a small white van pulled away from their house and they saw their mother’s car on the drive. They looked at each other quizzically, but as neither had any idea what it was, remained silent and continued in to the house ...
- Thu Apr 03, 2025 2:34 pm
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Megan's Anguish (Ch3 April 3)
Exhausted, Megan dropped down into her office chair and slumped forward to rest her head on her arms which were folded on the desk. It had been six tiring months since their mother had succumbed to her cancer, but Megan had finally won custody of her younger siblings. Their father had left years ago ...
- Thu Apr 03, 2025 6:26 pm
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Re: Megan's Anguish
As a warning here, there will be no under 18 sex, but there will be underage nudity. If that’s not for you, please read no further.
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- Thu Apr 03, 2025 9:33 pm
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Re: Megan's Anguish Ch3 April 4
Chapter 3
Megan had a fitful night, mostly sure she should warn her sisters, but a little doubt that would help. It may be that they dealt with it better as it happened? She just had no idea how to broach the subject. Somewhere around 5am, she gave up on sleep, then sat in the living room, staring ...
Megan had a fitful night, mostly sure she should warn her sisters, but a little doubt that would help. It may be that they dealt with it better as it happened? She just had no idea how to broach the subject. Somewhere around 5am, she gave up on sleep, then sat in the living room, staring ...