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- Tue Dec 03, 2024 7:58 pm
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Little Suzy and the raffle tickets.
Suzy, with her fiery red hair tied back in a neat ponytail, sat at the back of the classroom, her green eyes darting between the clock and the teacher's enthusiastic rant about the importance of the upcoming regional cheer meet. She tapped her pencil against the desk impatiently, her mind racing ...
- Tue Dec 03, 2024 8:40 pm
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Re: Samantha Uncontrolled
Thinking further on the difference between the two stories; Amy is a more or less a blameless victim but the same can not be said for Samantha. She was a willing participant in, and to some extent an enabler of, Amy's humiliations in the office. She bad mouthed Valeria to the boss Beatriz to make ...
- Thu Dec 05, 2024 3:53 pm
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Re: Samantha Uncontrolled
I loved the dialog on the rooftop in chapter 10 between Sam and Megan. Excellently done and it puts Sam's secret desires out in the open for the first time making her even more vulnerable to Megan and perhaps Valeria and company as well.
Sam now has a much more complicated depth to her than most ...
Sam now has a much more complicated depth to her than most ...
- Thu Dec 05, 2024 7:06 pm
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Re: Samantha Uncontrolled
Megan is interesting too. Clever, intelligent, manipulative. But then sometimes her age kicks in with an element of recklessness and an attitude of damn the consequences, which makes her even more threatening to Samantha. Reason would tell her to guard against Samantha getting caught by the wrong ...
- Mon Dec 09, 2024 8:11 pm
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Re: Samantha Uncontrolled
I know some readers may be put off by the time that needs to be invested in reading such long chapters but I for one am enjoying it enormously. Delighted to see Julia now on the scene and we have the seeds sown for 'babysitting' Megan while Beatriz is away, as well as the work with Valeria and Carla ...
- Mon Dec 09, 2024 11:48 pm
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Re: Samantha Uncontrolled
These latest chapters were marvelous (by the way, for the record, I LOVE long chapters! ) I especially loved Chapters 14 and 15! The tension was superb and the possibility of Amy and Sam meeting naked in that public park is very exciting indeed.
I also love the fact that Sam has to "babysit" Megan ...
I also love the fact that Sam has to "babysit" Megan ...
- Thu Dec 12, 2024 2:14 pm
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Re: Amy Unfiltered
I love the Friction between Samantha and Valeria. Very interesting possibilities.
I am curious, are you planning on posting Samantha's adventures in this thread along with Amy's manipulation or are starting a new story featuring Samantha and Valeria as a stand alone thread. Just curious so I ...
- Sat Dec 14, 2024 6:02 pm
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Stripped during X-Country Run
Chapter One
The muted atmosphere of the Hawthorne school changing room did little to dampen fifteen-year-old Beth Dawson's entrance as she strode in with her usual air of confidence. The Captain of the Athletics Team striking blonde hair framed her tanned face, drawing attention to her piercing blue ...
The muted atmosphere of the Hawthorne school changing room did little to dampen fifteen-year-old Beth Dawson's entrance as she strode in with her usual air of confidence. The Captain of the Athletics Team striking blonde hair framed her tanned face, drawing attention to her piercing blue ...
- Sun Dec 15, 2024 9:49 am
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Re: Stripped during X-Country Run
Chapter Two
Beth Dawson's legs pumped like pistons, her blonde hair a golden comet streaking through the crisp afternoon air. Her breaths came in quick, determined bursts as she surged ahead of the group, her athletic form slicing through the frigid atmosphere with precision and grace. In her mind ...
Beth Dawson's legs pumped like pistons, her blonde hair a golden comet streaking through the crisp afternoon air. Her breaths came in quick, determined bursts as she surged ahead of the group, her athletic form slicing through the frigid atmosphere with precision and grace. In her mind ...
- Wed Dec 18, 2024 4:28 pm
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Re: Samantha Uncontrolled
I loved the vivid scenes in chapter 19 of naked Sam being coerced into to playing with the children in the remote and impoverished neighborhood. You also captured amazingly well the innocence of the youth taking the embarrassed Sam in stride as well as describing the actions the elderly, skeptical ...