Pantsing and Stripping Forums

Hello! I’m a long time lurker and first time writer. I have never written anything outside of school in my life. I have a lot of ideas for this story, but before I continue I was hoping for some feedback in terms of the writing. Is it easy enough to follow? I had no idea writing characters talking b...

Thank you all so much for the feedback, I took your suggestions and added italics for the text conversation and made it clear she was in highschool. I hope you all like chapter 2, I had fun writing it. Please continue giving feedback on the writing, I thrive on both positive and negative feedback. T...

Thank you all for the support! Working on the next chapter now

I know this chapter is pretty tame with a lot of set up, I promise it ramps up soon, thanks again for all your messages and thumbs ups! Chapter 3 – The Walk Emma closed her door and collapsed onto the ground, absolutely drenched in both water and sweat. “I cannot believe I just did that,” she whispe...

Mistwolf wrote: ↑Fri Jan 19, 2024 2:45 am Great addition once again.

Also, I particularly like that her blackmailer is requiring her to be naked at all times in her bedroom.

Thank you! And I think you’re going to enjoy the beginning of the next chapter

Chapter 4 - The pool Emma awoke the next morning to her father knocking on her door. Groaning when she heard the noise, unable to believe she was already awake. Her late-night escapades were still fresh in her mind, “I could swear I fell asleep 10 seconds ago,” she thought through the morning haze. ...

Chapter 5 - Beauty Sleep When Emma walked into the house the first thing she did was make a cup of coffee. Her parent’s looked at her like she was crazy, “You’re having coffee at 6pm? You’ll be up all night!” her mother said. “You have no idea,” mumbled Emma under her breath. “The sun took more out ...

Chapter 6 - School Bus Strip After a long, hot soak in the tub, Emma began to relax and clear her mind of the craziest few hours of her life. She walked into her room and collapsed on the bed, falling asleep within seconds. Emma was startled awake as someone was shaking her saying, “Emma wake up alr...

Thanks for the support!!

Chapter 7 It was a bright, sunny morning as Emma walked to the bus stop on her second day of school, but to her it felt as if a bleak, dark cloud was overhead. She spent most of the walk trying to guess what her tormentor, Claire, had in store for her while reliving the previous day’s activities. “I...