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Agreed!!! But also Bare4U please take that as a compliment to your writing and I understand needing a break after this well thought out story!

This story is fictional, however, it is based upon an actual series of events. Location is Jacksonville, Florida, July, 1966.
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When I was 15-years-old my parents had to attend an out of state ...

Okay okay!
Just ONE MORE bit of praise.
I deeply appreciate you indulging us (specifically me😅) with the course of events.
I feel like a lot of authors on here feel the need to ‘subvert expectations’ if people are guessing the course of events or expressing desires for things to play out (Guilty, I ...

“This is my first attempt at writing this kind of fiction. Feedback welcome. It’s not likely to be the most original story ever, but let’s see how it goes!”

This quote that kicked this whole thing off…
Holy shit!
If this really was your first attempt at this…
You have a gift.

I liked it, though perhaps exposing Hannah feels like a loose end that should've been closed.

In a possible ENF spinoff, I’d still LOVE for Cam to see Hannah, Mia (and maybe even Ellie and Natalie) stripped
I know Cam and Ellie got together, but the poor boy deserves to see SOMETHING, right?

Mainly repeating the sentiments already ably expressed by others in this thread, but also appending that it’s always a slightly sad day when a very popular and excellent story has to come to an end. Since this is your very first story here, I can only anticipate somehow-even-better stories from you ...

Chapter 1: Pool Day

It was a hot, sunny summer day. A perfect day for the pool. We had already planned on going to grandma’s house that weekend and I was looking forward to swimming. I already knew Jen was going with us. She had come over the afternoon before and slept over so that we wouldn’t ...

I see what you mean.

The Marcie reference is an error. She did indeed go inside with Aunt Jill.