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- Thu Feb 06, 2025 4:18 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
Loved the way how Hannah tricked Cam into his nude state, I think Hannah realised the importance of teamwork.
Loved the naughty angle in Mary 😁. It kinda foreshadowed what’s gonna happen with Cam.
Cam now has to live with the fact that he lost the war with Hannah. It would be more humiliating ...
- Thu Feb 06, 2025 4:44 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
Loved the way how Hannah tricked Cam into his nude state, I think Hannah realised the importance of teamwork.
Loved the naughty angle in Mary 😁. It kinda foreshadowed what’s gonna happen with Cam.
Cam now has to live with the fact that he lost the war with Hannah. It would be more humiliating ...
- Thu Feb 06, 2025 6:04 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
That's how you know it's a good story when there's a lot of potential outcomes! I'm not sure Ellie would approve of blackmail since it seems on previous chapters she still cares for him but just wants to be even with what he saw but who knows with Mia and Hannah running the show! Can't wait for the ...
- Thu Feb 06, 2025 9:42 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
Ellie is with Mia in the next cubicle, she was the one who swiped Cameron’s swim suit. (She no longer need to imagine Cam naked in the changing cubicle, she had him where she wanted.😜 )
That’s what I thought, just wanted to be sure to complete the image in my head!
Thank you for ...
- Fri Feb 07, 2025 8:19 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
I've made a couple of small changes to the end of the most recent chapter, as it seems from these comments that I hadn't written it as clearly as it needed to be.
Yes, Ellie is in the cubicle next door, along with Mia.
No, she hasn't got a peek yet.
Only Mia is looking over the barrier at present ...
Yes, Ellie is in the cubicle next door, along with Mia.
No, she hasn't got a peek yet.
Only Mia is looking over the barrier at present ...
- Fri Feb 07, 2025 9:59 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
I've enjoyed the story, and like that the story seems to have come full circle, with them returning to the changing cubicle.
I am glad that you seemed to have stuck with your own storyline, while likely taking a few ideas and advice on board.
It is so easy to stray from your own ideas and plan ...
I am glad that you seemed to have stuck with your own storyline, while likely taking a few ideas and advice on board.
It is so easy to stray from your own ideas and plan ...
- Fri Feb 07, 2025 6:50 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
Though I must say, I think Hannah also deserves some exposure :D
By the end of this story, Hannah will not have had everything go her own way. I have something planned for her. I'll say no more than that. 😈
I've enjoyed the story, and like that the story seems to have come full circle, with ...
- Fri Feb 07, 2025 7:35 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
Even if someone’s speculation/prediction is close or even dead on to what you have planned, you should have the confidence in yourself to deliver at that point.
That’s just my opinion though.
I’ve seen first hand on here how subversion of expectations can kill a great story.
Go with your gut though ...
That’s just my opinion though.
I’ve seen first hand on here how subversion of expectations can kill a great story.
Go with your gut though ...
- Fri Feb 07, 2025 7:41 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)
I understand the comment about having people suggest something close to what you had planned.
It may not be logical, but there is a part of you that thinks about whether that person would think you did it because of their suggestion, and i would imagine, when it is in the open, like the comments on ...
It may not be logical, but there is a part of you that thinks about whether that person would think you did it because of their suggestion, and i would imagine, when it is in the open, like the comments on ...
- Sat Feb 08, 2025 6:48 am
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Right now am walking to a Diana's house, a friend of my cousin, she and her are walking in front of me talking about who knows what and shooting a condescending looks at me, it's another friday after school filled with mostly punishment for a mistake I did it was a bet with my cousin Diana ...
Right now am walking to a Diana's house, a friend of my cousin, she and her are walking in front of me talking about who knows what and shooting a condescending looks at me, it's another friday after school filled with mostly punishment for a mistake I did it was a bet with my cousin Diana ...