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by superevil7
Thu Feb 06, 2025 7:28 am
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Jackson and the Three Bares - Part 2

“You’re nudists!” Jackson looked over his shoulder at the girl in surprise, seeing her naked breasts for the first time. “She didn’t tell you?” Amy said, realizing she had just let the secret out. She sat down on the side of her lounge chair, facing him, and slumped a little. “What did she tell you?...
by NudeBaG
Thu Feb 06, 2025 9:42 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

Ellie is with Mia in the next cubicle, she was the one who swiped Cameron’s swim suit. (She no longer need to imagine Cam naked in the changing cubicle, she had him where she wanted.😜 ) That’s what I thought, just wanted to be sure to complete the image in my head! Thank you for confirmation ✌🏻 I’m...
by BareB4U
Fri Feb 07, 2025 8:19 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

I've made a couple of small changes to the end of the most recent chapter, as it seems from these comments that I hadn't written it as clearly as it needed to be. Yes, Ellie is in the cubicle next door, along with Mia. No, she hasn't got a peek yet. Only Mia is looking over the barrier at present. C...
by Summers
Fri Feb 07, 2025 9:59 am
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

I've enjoyed the story, and like that the story seems to have come full circle, with them returning to the changing cubicle. I am glad that you seemed to have stuck with your own storyline, while likely taking a few ideas and advice on board. It is so easy to stray from your own ideas and plan, when...
by BareB4U
Fri Feb 07, 2025 6:50 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

Though I must say, I think Hannah also deserves some exposure :D By the end of this story, Hannah will not have had everything go her own way. I have something planned for her. I'll say no more than that. 😈 I've enjoyed the story, and like that the story seems to have come full circle, with them re...
by NudeBaG
Fri Feb 07, 2025 7:35 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

Even if someone’s speculation/prediction is close or even dead on to what you have planned, you should have the confidence in yourself to deliver at that point. That’s just my opinion though. I’ve seen first hand on here how subversion of expectations can kill a great story. Go with your gut though....
by Summers
Fri Feb 07, 2025 7:41 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

I understand the comment about having people suggest something close to what you had planned. It may not be logical, but there is a part of you that thinks about whether that person would think you did it because of their suggestion, and i would imagine, when it is in the open, like the comments on ...
by JustHere10
Sat Feb 08, 2025 5:20 am
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Re: A Simple Little Prank Part 2

Decided to stick with Juliana's viewpoint since I posted it on enf and the first part was to just setup the story. "If I stay here they'll surely find me. They'll recognize me and I'll be known as the naked girl for the rest of high school" I thought. I just couldn't think rationally right...
by khiembay_22
Sat Feb 08, 2025 6:48 am
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Cake

Cake 1 Right now am walking to a Diana's house, a friend of my cousin, she and her are walking in front of me talking about who knows what and shooting a condescending looks at me, it's another friday after school filled with mostly punishment for a mistake I did it was a bet with my cousin Diana an...
by superevil7
Sat Feb 08, 2025 7:43 am
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Fly-Fishing: A Game of Chicken

Synopsis Boys will be boys, and play silly games, as they say. But with a cousin like Clara, it isn't long before the boys’ mom and aunt are told about the game they've been playing in front of their little girl cousins. Now much older and teenagers, the boys have to continue playing their silly ga...