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by perseus
Thu Apr 18, 2024 10:53 pm
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Girls don't need modesty: The Doctor Visit (Part 5 - 8/28) Complete!

I'm trying something a little different in this story. I had this idea in my head, and I've been working on it on and off. This won't be a long as my Lia story, but hopefully this will be a fun story. Girls's don't need modesty: The Doctor Visit part Description. 12-year-old twins Pete and Becca are...
by TeenFan
Sat Apr 20, 2024 4:33 pm
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_New April 18

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 4. Art Inspiration My grandfather, Arthur Slugworth, Willy Wonka's number one assistant, knew at all times where the Golden Tickets were located. He was the one to personally deliver, in disguise as a delivery driver, each box of Wonka bars that contained a Golde...
by TeenFan
Mon Apr 22, 2024 9:32 pm
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_New April 20

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 5. Going Into the Factory Throngs of eager onlookers cheered when the large gates to the Willy Wonka Chocolate Factory swung open. Mr. Wonka himself went out to greet the special guests at the gate. In his colorful purple outfit and wild curly hair and top hat he...
by TeenFan
Thu Apr 25, 2024 12:37 pm
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_New April 22

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 6. Pleasure Before the Plunge After the parents signed all the waivers, acknowledgements, addendums, agreeing to all the rules of conduct and regulations, the tour got started. There wasn't much interesting or unusual (except for the moving hand coat and hat hold...
by TeenFan
Sun Apr 28, 2024 1:22 pm
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_New April 25

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 7. Super Suction Charlie was the first one to hear the cries for help. He turned around to see flailing arms in the dark colored milky river a few feet from the shore. Mr. Wonka stood about eight feet from the edge of the liquid chocolate, but he made no move to ...
by TeenFan
Tue Apr 30, 2024 1:20 pm
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_New April 28

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 8. The Tunnel of Terror Right after Mrs. Gloop has been led away to be taken to the boiler room, hopefully to find Augustus Gloop not turned into a boiled tub of lard, a marvelous eight seat boat shows up on the chocolate river. It was a version of a paddleboat, ...
by TeenFan
Wed May 01, 2024 12:42 am
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_New April 30

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 9. Switcheroo in Plans After everyone got off the chocolate river boat, Willy Wonka gathered the group together and marched them past a large door. Helga Huckster looks at the door, looks at the sign above the door. INVENTING ROOM the sign reads. "Excuse me,...
by TeenFan
Thu May 02, 2024 1:19 pm
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_Two New Chapters April 30

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 10. The Undressing Room The only way to see the Inventing Room was for each guest to take a bath first. Cleanliness must be a requirement for achieving perfection or some such shit. The concept of "Clean Rooms" for high tech industries, pharmaceuticals,...
by TeenFan
Fri May 03, 2024 4:17 pm
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_New May 2

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 11. Wonka Wash "What the hell is this thing? It's not a bathtub!" Veruca Salt shouts up at Mr. Wonka, as she crouched down in the water. The train boxcar is not the size of a regular boxcar, looking somewhat short, but the sides of the walls are nearly ...
by TeenFan
Sun May 05, 2024 12:59 pm
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Re: The Chocolate Factory Fiasco_New May 2 and 3

The Chocolate Factory Fiasco Chapter 12. Entering the Inventing Room Charlie and the four other kids find themselves at the same place they were an hour earlier, at the door to the Inventing Room. The boat that originally brought them here is gone. The clothes each of them wore also gone, kept safe ...