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Ok that's annoying, timed out(?), had to log back in, and lost my whole reply :(

Take 2: The briefer version: On the subject of stretching suspension of disbelief (SoD)

Can't speak for the rest of the world, but public nudity 'without more' is acceptable here:

CPS public nudity/naturism ...

“Come on Emily Jane,” Amy wheedled as she finished tucking her polo shirt into her skirt’s hem, “you don’t want to get in to trouble do you?”

"What’s the problem,” Alex asked at the same time, patting her leg encouragingly, “you ain’t got anything we haven’t seen before…”

Emily Jane flinched back ...

TeenFan wrote: Wed Nov 08, 2023 11:58 am It turns out that cream of some young guy is a perfect substitute for butter, or better yet, mayonnaise, and has just the right amount of saltiness.
Pairs especially well drizzled over a roll of sushi.

Cream cheese (I think I just made myself feel ill )

Another enjoyable sojourn, but damn you for stopping me from doing any work (keep it up!) :D

At this point in the story, I'm torn... part of me would like Lia to tell her brother (in a fit of pique, realising he's just, effectively, pimped her out) something to the effect of 'if it's such a good ...

New to me, can't wait

I have wondered what people would think of Trevor from this chapter on...

...English and grammar were never something I was good at sadly.


Regarding Trevor, it's kinda weird, but I don't overly negative about/towards him... but think Lia definitely should (at least at this point in time).

And ...

jastes22 wrote: Thu Nov 09, 2023 7:13 pm Thank you!

Damn, saw you'd replied and there I was hoping we were about to find out who was at the door! Curses!

... I don't think her parents would care or believe her if Lia told them everything, I think Trevor would get away with it all, even though Trevor should be punished...

Agreed on all three counts, hence 'try'... offering perseus a few paths he could follow... Whether Trevor 'repents' or gets ...

Very nicely written, liking the intrigue of the 'maybe known' interloper, just wondering how long until Taylor inevitably snaps.... or if she'll wait to be 'utterly destroyed' and either seek revenge/slash her wrists/run away/or something else.

jastes22 wrote: Sun Nov 12, 2023 12:48 pm If anyone has a preference as to who figures out what, please let me know!

Well, to maintain internal consistency, the unknown visitor figuring out who she is whilst Taylor remains in the dark (at least initially) would be the way to keep up the pressure.