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by Debbifan
Tue Nov 10, 2020 5:22 pm
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Re: Debbi's sunbathing mishap - part 11 added

Part 12 ( a bit short but hopefully keeping it ticking over ) Maybe Jessica was finally starting to grow up, thought Debbi hopefully as she stood in the 13 year old brat's kitchen. Sure, she could think of ways she would rather spend Halloween than feeding a bunch of giggling teenage girls. But the ...
by Debbifan
Fri Nov 13, 2020 2:24 pm
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Re: Debbi's sunbathing mishap - part 12 added

Part 13 "We'll go back through to the other room" Jessica called. "No, what, stop it, don't be silly" protested Debbi, as she was ushered from the kitchen back into the lounge. But the kids ignored her and she was soon standing awkwardly in the middle of a circle as they arranged...
by Debbifan
Mon Nov 16, 2020 3:14 pm
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Re: Debbi's sunbathing mishap - part 13 added

Risking putting my head above the parapet during the current controversy to post another chapter since it was ready to go anyway. Part 14 "Ha, ha, ha, ha, no, eek, do stop, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, no, AARGH !" Debbi was laughing uncontrollably, not because there was anything remotely funny abo...
by Debbifan
Wed Dec 02, 2020 11:34 am
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Re: Debbi's sunbathing mishap - part 14 added

Part 15 Debbi gratefully stepped into her white lace thong. She would have preferred to be getting dressed again in all of her own clothes but at least a costume would be something to wear. "What am I ?" she called as the laughing youths left her alone momentarily, as Jessica had promised....
by Debbifan
Sat Dec 05, 2020 11:51 am
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Re: Debbi's sunbathing mishap - part 15 added

Part 16 "It's freezing" protested Debbi as they emerged from the house into the quiet cul de sac. "Moan, moan, moan. That's all you ever do" claimed Aditty. "Quite right, we'll soon warm up" agreed Jessica, aiming a slap at Debbi's green bottom. "Ow !" exclaim...
by Debbifan
Mon Dec 14, 2020 11:05 am
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Re: Debbi's sunbathing mishap - part 16 added

Part 17 Debbi was thankful that there was nobody else waiting at the bus stop but she was dismayed when the double decker pulled up and she saw how full it was. The game had just finished at the local football club and the fans were making their way back into town. All seats on the lower deck were o...
by Debbifan
Sun Feb 07, 2021 10:14 am
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Re: Debbi's sunbathing mishap

I admit the story kind of wandered off course. As I have said, it was originally just the first couple of parts for the summer contest but people wanted a continuation. Though to criticise it as becoming unbelievable is a bit harsh, since that would apply to 99% of what is written on here and on oth...
by Debbifan
Fri Mar 26, 2021 3:35 pm
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Re: sarah the shy exhibitionist First attempt at a story-criticism welcome.

Fun idea and an unusual take on a familiar trope. You obviously did not want any extreme humiliation which is fine. The story was short but sweet, which is again fine. However a little more development would have improved it. A physical description of Sarah and a little background like age, job etc ...
by Debbifan
Wed Mar 31, 2021 4:06 pm
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Re: Public Nudity for Points Ch 1,2,3, 4,5,6,7,8 . . .

Regardless of the extent to which it eventually transpires the others are scamming her, I like it that Carrie is getting some genuine appreciation of her body and some retrospective fun too.