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by coolcurt86
Thu Mar 30, 2023 1:12 am
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Re: First signs of Fall (short story)

very nice visually in your story very well done
by CinnabarSunset
Thu Mar 30, 2023 4:25 am
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Re: First signs of Fall (short story)

I hope Letty wasn't too attached to that dress! It will surely... fall... somewhere unpredictable. Maybe it'll blend in with fallen leaves.

Good thing for Letty that she left her apartment unlocked. (Perhaps because she didn't have a good place to keep her key while she was out?)

I generally think ...
by mastergepetto
Fri Apr 07, 2023 8:35 pm
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Head Girl’s Humiliating Punishment

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The principal was shocked to hear that the Head Girl had come to school wearing such inappropriate underwear. Strawberry panties? On an 18 year old? As the most senior girl in the school, she was supposed to set an example for the rest of the ...
by mastergepetto
Sat Apr 08, 2023 11:55 am
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Re: First signs of Fall (short story)

Very fun first story! Welcome to the forum!

Pure wardrobe malfunctions stories like this are sometimes hard to write and make believable, put you nailed it! I can’t imagine what was going through poor Letty’s head as she frantically tried to pull the dress from the tree.

I hope the Asian tourist ...
by SDS
Mon Apr 10, 2023 3:41 pm
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Re: Happy Easter (Short Story)

Really enjoyed this! Love a naughty boy scout story too!

Looking forward to more from you in future
by mastergepetto
Mon Apr 10, 2023 5:24 pm
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Re: Happy Easter (Short Story)

Another fantastic short story! I love instances where the older female protagonist is humiliated by younger boys. I’m glad the Boy Scouts were able to put their knot tying skills to good use!
by neverdoubted
Mon Apr 10, 2023 7:54 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 4/8)

Dare Me - Chapter 13 - Hardship Study Buddy (Part 15)

Was it cruel of me not to give my sister advanced warning of her childhood crush coming to pay visit? I don't think so. She had already traded away her bargaining chips for a mop. She was doomed to spend the rest of her dare at my mercy, even ...
by mastergepetto
Tue Apr 11, 2023 2:27 am
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Re: Major League Pantsing (Short Story) *inspired by mastergepetto*

Ha ha ha! This is such a fantastic short story! Thank you for writing this and thank you for crediting me as the inspiration! Interestingly enough, I played baseball in college and baseball is my favorite sport.

I wonder how many times over the years she passed over that old pair of Bratz Panties ...
by mastergepetto
Tue Apr 11, 2023 2:54 am
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Re: Major League Pantsing (Short Story) *inspired by mastergepetto*

On a different note, as a nerd, the name Lena always reminds me of Lena Luther from DC comics— Lex Luthor’s younger sister and frequent friend/ally of Supergirl. Reading about your Lena being pantsed to her Bratz Doll panties made me consider possible situations where Ms. Lena Luther herself is ...