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“Hi, cousin Julia!” Katelyn's voice sang, as she stood in the open doorway to our house. What the hell was she doing here so early! I thought to myself, standing there in front of her, in such a compromised position. I was wearing nothing but a pair of orange panties and white socks, and the panties...

“Josh, your sister only goes naked one day a year, and your father and I are not about to change that unless Julie requests to be naked more."

What will it take to make Julie request to be naked more?

I love the way you think. Once a year is way not often enough. :) I agree totally!!! I'm in the opposite camp. To have her naked more frequently distorts the original premise of the story and makes it more run of the mill. I was going to say basically that. It's only chapter 2 and you guys already ...

Maybe she will be forced to go black Friday shopping naked since it is still her naked day. Also, she could screw up and have her mom make her stay naked for the Thanksgiving/black friday holiday weekend until she goes back to school on Monday. Shhhhhh! Exnay on the spoil-ya... I mean, I have plent...

The next few days, after the hotel event, had been the most normal Lia had experienced since her punishment had started. Her mom had left her clothes every morning, even her nightgown, and when evenings came, she wasn’t asked to get undressed. Her parents had even overruled Chuck more than once. Whe...

I wouldn't worry about criticism over minute details. You have done marvelous job and I hope you continue with the story. It certainly doesn't seem like you have lost your path to me. If you are worried about a particular detail in a chapter you can always use the edit function (the pencil icon at t...

rrh62 wrote: ↑Thu Feb 01, 2024 3:38 pm I certainly hope this is not an indication that you're planning to kill the story soon. I strongly believe it has a potential for a 40+ chapter saga.

I totally agree!!

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Thanks for all the kind feedback! I don't mind criticism either, I view it as a way to help my writing improve. What I meant by "losing my path" was that originally the nudity was a way to keep Lia in the house, its very different now and I'm just hoping that it makes sense how the charact...

Closely following this series and loving it. I hope that one of the story's central focuses remains the upping Lia's humiliation, gradually but surely, by her parents and family. That is what attracted me to this story in the first place, especially how Lia had to ask permission from her parents to ...