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Neverdoubted has mastered the cliff hanger. I need to break out my mountaineering gear.

Bad pennies keep turning up. Old enemies again--Emily didn't manage to shed them.

Thanks for the last two chapters. Will Emily ever get back home?

Payback is a cousin--or an annoying little brother.

:lol: And then one of the girls will start wondering "Why aren't we doing this All. The. Time. ???" :lol: How long before the mothers join the girls after the girls start having too much fun? Pretty soon, the girls will be routinely practicing holiday nudity because every day is a holiday.

What embarrasses Lia more--being the only one naked or being naked with Claire? Masturbating herself or submitting to someone else masturbating her? Discussing those topics humiliates Lia. Now how can "which is more embarrassing" be presented through the story? One reason Lia is embarrasse...

This story has promise.
What if Julie Thomas' parents show up at the wrong time?
Or one of Julie's employers is taking a life drawing class?
Will being a life model open doors for Julie?

The SmartWatch world has so much potential that it would be a shame for it to end. Even simple one-off stories such as a family relocating because the mother embraced Feminudism or a corporate headquarters moved in for the same reason.

Back to hanging us all over the cliff!

Neverdoubted knows how to build tension. Will Mikey black out? Will Mikey wonder if this were all a dream? Will Mikey convince us readers that he doesn't really know?

Or will Goosey walk in at the last moment? Worse--Mom!

Camp Valiance is off to a bold start! How long will the depilatory body-wash work? Or will that body wash be applied daily?

I hope this story concludes at home with Mary Arthur living under the same rules. Good luck on this story line.

That was a wild ride!

I'm guessing it will be September before we see The Lost Years. It will take time to top Big Sister, Little Sister, and make The Lost Years better.

Thank you for an entertaining tale. If I get antsy for more, I can start over with Dare Me's first chapter.