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by mars357
Mon May 22, 2023 9:39 am
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel – Let the Punishment Fit the Crime


With a risk of sounding a bit entitled I'm going to feel a significant amount of distress if this story doesn't get finished. One of my favorite of the recent stories for sure.


Oh my, no pressure then :mrgreen: Well here's another chapter. And I'm chipping away at another (obvious) one. No ...
by mars357
Tue May 23, 2023 10:24 pm
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The day I lost it

Here's an invitation for anyone who wants to roleplay scenarios along ENF themes with me as the male/dom character to PM me ;) I can give you details for f-list or even Discord for that.

Now for the real-life experience. Even if it's more of an NM than ENM, as you will see.

I was never shy when ...
by mars357
Wed May 24, 2023 4:02 pm
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel – Let the Punishment Fit the Crime


Dude.

Glorious. No notes.

Just like you've done with Jenny and Piper before her, I love every decision you've made for Ally's character. I had wondered if/how her tomboyishness would feed into how she handled things, and I was pleasantly surprised by how you had that feed into her mannerisms ...
by mars357
Wed May 24, 2023 10:38 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 5/24)

Oooh devious. It's GREAT news that the girls are a healthy mix and not all completely naive.

Loving this! Very curious about the upcoming (naked?) drumming session! And recalling a thing or two about Riviera Dave and his medicine, I'm rather "suspicious" of those odd fruits Mikey has just been fed ...
by mars357
Thu May 25, 2023 7:56 pm
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel – Let the Punishment Fit the Crime

Thank you very much, both, and everyone who has voted.

Incidentally, the votes agree with what you have both said!

Piper will fight (13 to 10), Jenny (12 to 9) will plea for mercy and so will Ally (16 to 7).

This is unexpected though the idea of Jenny turning on Piper and maybe forcing her to ...
by mars357
Thu May 25, 2023 7:58 pm
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel – Let the Punishment Fit the Crime

Chapter 4 – Wet, wet, wet

I assumed that this development was obvious and predictable. From the girls’ astounded expressions, it seemed like it was anything but. I was quickly learning it was far easier to be smart and devious and think ahead when you were the person dishing out the teasing and ...
by mars357
Thu May 25, 2023 10:01 pm
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Re: The Tutor

Oh boy, I *do* love this start! So I'm letting you know—I really hope you do carry on!

Now this here thing is one of my favourite *ever* genres—when someone takes a pretty much total cliche (tutor/tutee) and gives it a unique vibe, style (and hopefully a twist ;) ) of their own.

The probability ...
by mars357
Sat May 27, 2023 2:47 pm
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel – Let the Punishment Fit the Crime


Long time fan of CaughtofLore and really enjoying this, would love to find/read more of your work mars357, please keep contributing both of you! :D

Bit of a suggestion/request I thought I'd make (but feel free to ignore at your discretion)!

Miriam Henkins, though not guilty of a big 'crime ...
by mars357
Tue May 30, 2023 11:11 pm
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel – Let the Punishment Fit the Crime

Chapter 5 — Mercy… and War

I didn’t miss a beat. As soon as I closed the door, I turned towards the three of them, all trying to cover up and hang on what little modesty there was left to be had and spoke, out loud and with clarity and smoothness that surprised even me.

Turns out arousal and ...
by mars357
Wed May 31, 2023 10:30 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 5/31)

This is a great chapter and a thoroughly satisfying direction for the story (well, maybe not for Mikey :mrgreen: ) so much nudity! Great descriptions of the girls.

And now, with Mel in charge? Uh huh! The boy is in for a real challenge, isn't he? ;)