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by superevil7
Mon Mar 20, 2023 4:02 am
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Re: Candice's Laundry Day Mishap (Chapter 6 - March 15)


I do enjoy the story so far, but i would love if Dylan caught her sister misbehaving, and punished her. Was hoping she was lying about being allowed to bring visitors, and Dylan caught her in a lie as well has allowing uninvited guests. People being brought down from their high horse is always a ...
by superevil7
Wed Mar 22, 2023 2:23 am
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Re: Candice's Laundry Day Mishap (Chapter 6 - March 15)


superevil7, just keep the story how you planned it to be, because if someone does not like it, it is their problem, you are the creator, and writer, it is your idea and vision, so it is totally up to you, what others say honestly does not matter at all. Keep up the great work.


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by TigerKitten28
Wed Mar 22, 2023 1:15 pm
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Heather and Robert [Part 5 added 4/23]

[Part 1 starts here. Part 4 and 5 are in a separate reply, below]

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I was seven years old when you moved in across the street. We met in school, but it wasn't until we were eight years old that we really became friends. I think it ...
by Casanova
Tue Mar 28, 2023 11:54 am
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Re: Candice's Laundry Day Mishap (Chapter 6 Redux - March 27)

Had to read the chapters side by side. Everything has been made softer, but it does add some extra spice.
For ex the mom being a little bit of a pushover and swept up by the events, maybe things will spiral out of her control.

I actually had no issues with the original. Plus I wouldn't mind the ...
by SensoryOverlord
Sun Apr 09, 2023 11:13 pm
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Re: Candice's Laundry Day Mishap (Chapter 6 Redux - March 27)


Don't expect the neighbors to play a role beyond this chapter. They really only showed up to embarrass Candice some more, by having her naked in the exact way she was hoping wouldn't happen, with the neighbors seeing her. The idea of her getting more punishment is to show just how malicious Alexa ...
by superevil7
Tue Apr 11, 2023 6:36 am
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Re: Doctor Turners Behavior Modification Program [NEW Chapter July 3rd]

Casanova wrote: Sun Apr 09, 2023 2:43 pm Do continue this story.
One day, but I can't promise you when.
by superevil7
Tue Apr 11, 2023 11:11 pm
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Re: Candice's Laundry Day Mishap (Chapter 6 Redux - March 27)


This story is developing wonderfully; very erotic and entertaining. I vote in favor of 'Redux 6', in particular due to the old neighbor scold introducing the ice-breaker concept - in her youth if a girl got aroused by her naked punishment, she'd be fingered till she 'came to her senses.' On top of ...
by Sue DeNym
Tue Apr 18, 2023 12:14 am
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3. Emily and Missy's New Family

3. Emily and Missy's New Family

"Emily! Missy! Rise and shine!"

Kathryn opened the door to her daughters' bedroom.

"Good morning, girls," she said cheerfully as she padded across the thick carpet and threw open the curtains on the windows. "Did you two have a good night's sleep?"

Emily and ...
by Sue DeNym
Wed Apr 19, 2023 2:09 pm
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Re: It Isn't Easy Being a Girl

SDS must have been referring to the FNA (Forced Nudity Archive) website. It's the only other site that I have posted on.

So far, I only have "It Isn't Easy Being a Girl" on FNA. I will probably be submitting any story I write to both sites simultaneously from here on out.

By the way, when I posted ...
by superevil7
Fri Apr 28, 2023 6:31 am
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Candice's Laundry Day Mishap - Chapter 7

** Candice’s perspective **

We weren't even inside the house for 10 seconds before my mom was on my case again. “Candice, nobody told you that you could stop positioning yourself the way you were positioned outside. Get your hands behind your head and spread those legs open, missy!”

“What?… But ...