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Hey, I just read over a couple of your stories. I was reading more to give feedback than pleasure -- the age range of these stories is young for me, but that's a matter of taste. My feedback is more about the writing and not the content. To echo others here, I think your narration, story flow, and d...

Wow, what a wonderful story! I love the way Jennifer is so sure of herself at first, but ends up getting smacked down so hard. I also enjoyed the way Josh was able to keep her under control every time she tried to argue with him. It was especially clever how Jennifer basically gets herself into thi...

Part 3 The boys agreed to another game on the condition that we both do a humiliating twirl. Hands at our sides, of course. Me, I don’t exactly want to stop covering myself, but Julia, damn. She is basking in the attention. I can’t believe that I’m the shy one, tonight. I’m the party girl and Julia ...

I've been enjoying this story for a long time. I only recently made an account here, but really, the writing is exquisite. I love the way you gradually move Bella into acceptance as a stripper and take away her agency as it gets closer to midnight. Every time she tries to take back some control, som...

A/N: It's yet another BP/MissAriel crossover. It's almost as if Jennifer just can't get enough of Kelly. But I think maybe she'll have her fill this time. ------------- Part 1 I knock on her door. It’s the weekend, so I figure she’s home. My visit is a little unannounced. It’s impulsive, which isn’t...

Jennifer is a good girl for finally admitting it. But somehow, I fear she might get more than she bargained for. Kelly is a super-sweet girl, but she's got a sadistic side to her as well. So I just hope Jennifer knows what she is getting into! I really think she doesn't, BP. I'm pretty sure Jennife...

This story was very hot and intense! It reminds me of the movie Cruel Intentions, with the way Rachel acts, and even the sibling rivalry being hinted at. I'm actually glad you said that. There were two inspirations behind the Rachel character. One was *definitely* Sarah Michelle Gellar from Cruel I...

A/N: Another chapter. Of course, I have lots more where this came from. But one thing I've learned writing here is, you guys can't handle the whole story all at once. You readers are just like Jennifer, a girl that deserves some comeuppance. You need to be edged. You can't be trusted to have the who...

A/N: The part in Italics was written as a prompt by my friend, BP. What follows is my response. Poor Tyler. ------------------ Part 1 Hey, Tyler. Thanks for coming over. What? I'm not looking at you funny. Okay. Well, maybe I am. Do I want something? Yeah, I guess I do. Do you want me to tell you ab...

A/N: The third story in Jennifer's "The Smash Bet" universe. Jennifer has been dating Josh for a while now, but for some reason, he still hasn't introduced her to his friends. When Josh relents and lets her come to Halo Night, Jennifer tries to make it all about her. All Josh and his boys ...