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Hello! I’m a long time lurker and first time writer. I have never written anything outside of school in my life. I have a lot of ideas for this story, but before I continue I was hoping for some feedback in terms of the writing. Is it easy enough to follow? I had no idea writing characters talking b...

A Day mostly spent naked Astrid Next morning I woke them with a kiss like I kissed them good night the evening before. Paula held Enrico close. Their hands were entwined. So cute. Paula looked up to me and was puzzled. But I smiled and kissed her on the forehead again. „You both look sooo cute! Lik...

Thank you all so much for the feedback, I took your suggestions and added italics for the text conversation and made it clear she was in highschool. I hope you all like chapter 2, I had fun writing it. Please continue giving feedback on the writing, I thrive on both positive and negative feedback. T...

Great end to this arc! On the other things you mentioned, I am bummed to hear that the Ghetto Carnival will not come out, the name alone peaked my interest. But i understand your reasons for wanting to move on. I hope to one day read it though. I would definitely encourage you to post "big sist...

Chapter 2a: 13 years old It was a mistake, but one that would cost me dearly, and today would be the day that I would have to pay! No, I'm not talking about what happened when I was 8 years old again, I'm talking about what happened about a month after my 13th birthday. It had been a typical lazy Su...

I was hoping that Big Sister/ Little Sister would result in the cheerleading squad to practice in the nude. Coach Easterling would follow from the front in order to lead by example and sometimes the cheerleading squad would perform nude. All future cheerleader candidates would undergo nude initiatio...

************************************************** Author’s note: the following is not the story, but merely a prologue. It was suggested that I post this to judge reader interest. If you would like to read the actual story, let me know. But unless there is a significant amount of interest, it will ...

I hope I don't disappoint, but this story I plan on sticking to OON. Katelyn was made to flash her breasts so that she'd want to get revenge on Julie even harder.

Awesome start. I knew where the story was headed, having read Usagi drop.

Please don't keep us waiting.


On a side note, it is genuinely heartwarming. If the adult themes were excluded.

This story is incredible! I love how Julie got in trouble for spying on her brother and how protective her mom gets over her son's privacy too! I love the punishment that they decided on too! The slow stripping of Julie is really enjoyable! I also love how despite what's going on to her, Julie's pan...