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by perseus
Thu Oct 19, 2023 2:50 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)

I like the way you all think! Some of these ideas pretty close to what I have planned. I will say that the nature of Lia's punishment is going to change quite a bit. Not in a way Lia is going to like :D
by perseus
Fri Oct 20, 2023 12:18 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)

computerphoto wrote: Thu Oct 19, 2023 3:17 pm Maybe her parents will talk to the school and extend her punishment 24/7 and send her to school naked too.
They are currently in summer now but I have already started thinking about how this punishment could extend to school if I'm able to keep going with it :D
by perseus
Fri Oct 20, 2023 4:30 am
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Re: Erica Stories - The Big Game

I love the Erica stories! Can't wait to read these!
by perseus
Sun Oct 22, 2023 12:29 am
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Re: New Erica Stories

This is great! I had thought I had read all the Erica stories there were, always happy to have more :D.
by perseus
Tue Oct 24, 2023 6:17 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)

A fun chapter 2. I think the poor girl needs therapy, myself. Therapy is... Useful for a DA: Therapist are duty bound to keep secrets, and would end their career by losing their license if they let one get out Useful for a young exhibitionist: She can learn what the word means and get a grip on her...
by perseus
Wed Oct 25, 2023 12:40 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)

Therapy is an opportunity to have Lia embrace nudism. She's already a secret exhibitionist (got drunk and danced topless at the frat party) but she was hesitant and needed to have her inhibitions removed. Now Lia is SUPPOSEDED to exhibit her nude body at home--and possibly other places. A therapist...
by perseus
Wed Oct 25, 2023 12:43 am
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Lia's new reality part 3

Lia couldn't believe what she had just done. She had just been caught doing her most intimate and private act by her parents! Now she was regretting not fighting Stacy and Kyle harder when they asked her to masturbate. In fact, she put up no resistance to them at all! Her senses had once again start...
by perseus
Wed Oct 25, 2023 6:12 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)

So far, enjoyable. Chapter One--Lia falls down the rabbit hole head. first. Chapter Two, while inside the rabbit hole she encounters a bigger, deeper hole. Chapter Three, there's a third rabbit hole in the second rabbit hole and this one is a briar patch! Deeper and deeper. Waiting for the next cha...
by perseus
Thu Oct 26, 2023 12:40 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)

Silly questions: Is Lia on The Pill? Is Lia's lack of impulse control worrisome enough to seek evaluation by a mental health care professional? Did Lia have any friends other than the gruesome twosome who were exploiting Lia? Only three chapters but no mention of concerned friends visiting Lia. Her...
by perseus
Thu Oct 26, 2023 12:58 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)

Congratulations on a well written story with good pacing and relatable characters! I like how you are willing to let good scenes play out and not rushing them. Beyond my standard author advice to "use dialog sparingly", my only specific feedback would be very minor. Try to avoid overusing...