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by perseus
Thu Feb 01, 2024 7:17 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)

Thanks for all the kind feedback! I don't mind criticism either, I view it as a way to help my writing improve. What I meant by "losing my path" was that originally the nudity was a way to keep Lia in the house, its very different now and I'm just hoping that it makes sense how the charact...
by perseus
Sun Feb 04, 2024 8:24 am
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Re: Dare Me (new 2/2)

Great start to this new section of the story! I'm very interested to see how much further Hana will be willing to go in front of Mikey.
by perseus
Mon Feb 05, 2024 7:08 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)

Thank you both for the feedback! I really appreciate the kind words! @superevil I'm glad that this is your favorite chapter! I've been looking forward to this one for a while, Bruce will be making more appearances :D @retroeroticim I'm really glad you like the idea of her family embarrassing her, it...
by perseus
Mon Feb 05, 2024 7:10 pm
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Re: The New Rules (Chapter 44 - Feb 5th)

I love this part! Abbie being put on stage, in front of so many of her peers and actually liking the attention on her naked body is fantastic! I cannot wait to see how the girls will handle the next part, now that the focus is going to be on the more intimate parts :twisted:
by perseus
Wed Feb 07, 2024 7:02 am
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Re: Dare Me (new 2/2)

For me it's really hard to pick a favorite because all are so good. The two that really stick out for me are the history presentation chapter and the Halloween chapters. My only wish with the Halloween one is that we could have followed Lucy as her costume was slowly coming apart :D
by perseus
Wed Feb 07, 2024 7:08 am
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Re: The Family Tradition: Picture Day (2c - Feb 5th)

I loved this chapter! I really enjoyed how Julie didn't get into trouble for knocking over the tree and her parents were more concerned with her being okay. I just love how everyone treats Julie on her naked day, it's not fair at all to Julie but most everyone is still kind to her, aside from some t...
by perseus
Wed Feb 14, 2024 7:04 pm
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Re: Suggestion Box: Swim Buddies (Chapter 4 - Feb 12th)

Love that this one is back! That was such an enjoyable chapter! I absolutely love public nudity stunts and you covered both things a naked girl is made to do at once, pump the gas and go inside and pay.

Great work! Can't wait to see more!
by perseus
Wed Feb 21, 2024 6:37 am
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Re: The Family Tradition: Picture Day (2d - Feb 19th)

This chapter was absolutely amazing! The way Katelyn and the boys teased Julie was perfect! And the bathing scene was HOT! I love that Julie couldn't admit that she wanted it at the end, now she has to go back downstairs being all hot and bothered!

The wait for the next chapter is going to be brutal.
by perseus
Mon Feb 26, 2024 6:26 am
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Lia's new reality part 10

Once they returned home, Lia was allowed the rest of the day to herself. Her mom didn't give her the usual chores; she mostly started in her room to read or watch TV. The main thing that kept it from being a normal lazy day was that Lia was still naked. She knew that she wouldn’t be getting any clot...
by perseus
Wed Feb 28, 2024 2:04 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 10 - 2/25)

" I’m taking you with me to the campaign office tomorrow.” Steve told her. Chapter 11 has a lot of promise. Chapter 10 is chock full of surprises, with every chapter providing more than expected. What if Bruce has a summer internship at Steve's office as a campaign volunteer? Then there is Cla...