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by neverdoubted
Wed Nov 13, 2024 10:53 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)

Kudos to you for having captured the imagination of so many readers. I hope you continue writing and don't get discouraged by detractors. My only advice as a writer is to go a little easier on Riley's "racing heart". It races, pounds, and skips beats so often, I'm starting to worry the poo...
by mcenf
Thu Nov 14, 2024 3:50 pm
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Amy Unfiltered - Chapter 11

Taking a deep breath, Amy moved away from the view from the door, her steps clumsy and trembling as she tried to get out of the field of vision of anyone passing through the hallway. She knew that in such a public place, any mistake could mean being discovered, and the fear made her move clumsily an...
by edithdick
Fri Nov 15, 2024 3:54 am
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 20 Posted (11/14/2024)

School bells are ringing loud and clear; vacation is over, school is here – Winifred C Marshall More Therapy – Chapter 20 The doors to the school were locked when we arrived. It was early still, so nobody had yet shown up. I wanted to feel nervous, but unfortunately, Sophie was in charge of that em...
by mcenf
Fri Nov 15, 2024 2:35 pm
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Amy Unfiltered - Chapter 12

Amy could barely compose herself after getting up from the sofa. The challenge of being there, under the watchful eye of Megan and Julia, had left her exhausted and with a mix of humiliation and bewilderment. However, her thoughts were abruptly interrupted when Megan, in a light tone, suggested cont...
by Robert Brooks
Fri Nov 15, 2024 3:12 pm
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Washing Day

Washing Day I know that probably for a lot of you 'nothing really happens' in this story, but it really amused and titillated me at the time. It was just something I witnessed at a friend's house one time. I'm glad I didn't have an annoying little sister like his! *** It was second or third year at...
by mcenf
Fri Nov 15, 2024 9:09 pm
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Amy Unfiltered - Chapter 13

She took a deep breath, trying to calm her racing pulse, but the panic didn't subside. How did I get into this? she thought, trembling at the weight of the situation. She needed to find a way out, anything that would allow her to regain control. But trapped and without her backpack, Amy felt that ev...
by TiramiSu
Sat Nov 16, 2024 8:40 pm
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Re: Amy Unfiltered

Nice story with great narration and high potential. Where it gets really great is when the focus shifts from being just a succession of embarrassing/naked situations per se (which would risk getting boring in the long term) to the reluctant arousal caused within Amy by such embarrassing/naked situat...
by mcenf
Sat Nov 16, 2024 10:25 pm
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Amy Unfiltered - Chapter 14

The three girls, in their uniform skirts and backpacks, left the school and headed towards the subway station. The walk was uncomfortable for Amy, who watched with apprehension as Megan and Julia walked beside her, engaged in a light conversation. At that time of noon, the subway station was practic...
by Skylar21
Sun Nov 17, 2024 11:01 pm
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My Sister Was Horrified, but helpless

I had no classes that Friday so I decided to drive home from college. As I pulled into my parents' house I noticed that the only car in the driveway belonged to my older sister and her husband. As I opened the door to the house I heard laughing and carrying on from down the hall. I entered the great...
by Emily
Sun Nov 17, 2024 11:44 pm
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Chapter 44 Ellie's eyes remained fixed on the road ahead, her knuckles white on the steering wheel. "You're going to owe us," she said, her voice low and serious. "Big time." Riley nodded, her heart racing. "I understand," she murmured, though she had no idea what they...