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I’d love some feedback on this! What am I doing well? What can I be doing better? What fun ideas do you have for Riley to do? Your story is good written and well thought. It is consistent. What you can do better? I’m not judging you on that Ideas, posted one idea for you. Think of something else. B...

Your post motivated me to reread this story, which I did over the last few days. After doing so, I have to say that it needs a lot of work. You need to work on many more chapters, because the story and the quality of writing is too good to allow it to sit dormant any longer, and once picked up, it s...

“There you are! I was starting to get worried you wouldn't get back in time! Did you enjoy your little bike ride, Julie?” Momma was waiting near the door to the garage, which came into the kitchen, for me, and our group of intrepid bike riders. Josh had helped me lose the protective equipment in the...

Caroline stepped away and started typing on her phone. “The…team? You’re inviting them here?” She didn’t look up from her phone. “Hmm? Of course I am. They should all be a part of this. After all, we’re a team , aren’t we?” My throat felt scratchy, and anything I could think of caught in my throat. ...

Chapter 10 "Well, I think that was a pretty successful trip to the mall," Aria said with a laugh, linking her arm through Ellie's. "Don't you agree, Ellie?" Ellie nodded in agreement, a mischievous glint in her eye. "Oh, definitely. I mean, we got everything on our list, an...

Chapter 11 Riley considered the options for a moment before deciding. "Truth," she said. Ellie grinned. "Okay, Riley. We have a lot of embarrassing photos of you. Which one do you think would be the most mortifying to show to Lily?" Riley swallowed hard, feeling a blush creep up...

Chapter 12 "Um... okay," Lily stammered, walking over to where Riley was still sitting on the bed. Riley stood up, her heart pounding as she felt Lily's hands on her shoulders, undoing the clasps of her dress. The material fell to the floor, revealing Riley's plain white bra and panties u...

Chapter 13 Their gazes locked, and for a moment, time seemed to stand still. The air between them crackled with tension, electric with the anticipation of what was to come. Claire watched them, a satisfied smile playing at the corners of her lips. Riley swallowed hard, feeling her heart race even f...

Chapter 14 Riley watched with envy as Lily slipped on her leggings, shirt, bra, and panties, each article of clothing seeming to enhance her already flawless figure. She couldn't help but feel a twinge of shame as she realized that she herself was still naked and exposed, her body on display for ev...

I'm really enjoying where this story is going! More naked Claire? Yes!! :D Don't get me wrong, I enjoy Lia very much, but there's just something about the way you write Claire that is amazing, naked especially! I'm with Hooked6 too. I can't wait to see what kind of things Claire ends up putting Lia ...