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- Mon Jan 08, 2024 5:32 am
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Lia's new reality part 8
Both girls and the boys froze; even Trevor was stunned at the turn of events. Claire’s parents were standing at the edge of the lobby, near the hallway that led to the elevators. “Get over here now!” Claire’s mom had yelled. Claire had always been obedient, never giving her parents any trouble. She ...
- Wed Jan 10, 2024 5:44 pm
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- Wed Jan 10, 2024 8:28 pm
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Re: The Family Tradition: Picture Day (1c - Jan 10th)
Great chapter!
I have her feeling her big cousin isn't done with her after having the indignity of her own little boobs exposed and compared!
I have her feeling her big cousin isn't done with her after having the indignity of her own little boobs exposed and compared!
- Sun Jan 14, 2024 2:12 am
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The Blinds - Update 9/19/24 - Caught Naked
Hello! I’m a long time lurker and first time writer. I have never written anything outside of school in my life. I have a lot of ideas for this story, but before I continue I was hoping for some feedback in terms of the writing. Is it easy enough to follow? I had no idea writing characters talking b...
- Sun Jan 14, 2024 7:51 pm
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Re: The Blinds
Thank you all so much for the feedback, I took your suggestions and added italics for the text conversation and made it clear she was in highschool. I hope you all like chapter 2, I had fun writing it. Please continue giving feedback on the writing, I thrive on both positive and negative feedback. T...
- Mon Jan 22, 2024 10:12 pm
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The Family Tradition: Picture Day - Chapter 2b
“Hi, cousin Julia!” Katelyn's voice sang, as she stood in the open doorway to our house. What the hell was she doing here so early! I thought to myself, standing there in front of her, in such a compromised position. I was wearing nothing but a pair of orange panties and white socks, and the panties...
- Tue Jan 23, 2024 4:06 pm
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Re: The Family Tradition: Picture Day (2b - Jan 22nd)
I must say Chapters 2a and 2B are just the most exciting chapters of the story so far. The embarrassment and humiliation are just superb and I love that Katelyn has returned as well. There's nothing like a rival to really ratchet up the tension! Masterful writing, Superevil7. Eagerly waiting to see...
- Wed Jan 24, 2024 1:28 pm
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Re: The Family Tradition: Picture Day (2b - Jan 22nd)
I'm in the opposite camp. To have her naked more frequently distorts the original premise of the story and makes it more run of the mill.
- Sat Jan 27, 2024 6:09 pm
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The Experiment
My name is Carl, and I am the student editor of a school newspaper at a small liberal arts college in New England. Our weekly paper usually focuses on updating students on the available activities of the collage along with articles and editorials about the social sciences, psychology and the humanit...
- Sun Jan 28, 2024 8:19 pm
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A Bare-Bottomed Spanking
The following is applicable to all chapters of “A Bare-Bottomed Spanking:” © September 2006 by Blondie. This is a work of fiction, and is fantasy only. Names, characters, places and incidents are products of the author's imagination and are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events or loca...