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rrh62 wrote: Thu Feb 01, 2024 3:38 pm I certainly hope this is not an indication that you're planning to kill the story soon. I strongly believe it has a potential for a 40+ chapter saga.

I totally agree!!

Hooked6

I just LOVE how you are writing your character, Katelyn. She isn't really evil, she is playful, or cheeky as our British friends are wont to say. Sure, she is having fun at Julie's expense and making the most out of every opportunity to embarrass and humiliate poor Julie, but her actions are so well ...

Personal preference is a girl stripping/humiliating another girl. No one understands how to push a woman's buttons and really get under their skin like another woman. Face it, no matter how a man studies a woman/girl he'll never really understand what she is thinking or feeling. Even when a man is ...

BRILLIANT! I am absolutely thrilled with the rivalry between Katelyn and Julia. The interaction between the two is superbly written. I hope this continues for many more chapters.

Hooked6

Very interesting start with loads of potential! Eagerly awaiting the next installment.

If you wouldn't mind a few minor constructive suggestions, I would recommend skipping a line between each paragraph (or double line if you are using a word processor that this site's software posts paragraph's ...

I can't believe I am just now getting around to reading this marvelous story! I love that her blackmailer turned out to be a female classmate. Your pacing is perfect and the descriptive visuals are most entertaining!

Well done! Looking forward to more soon.

Hooked6

As for describing her features. You’re correct that nearly all stories have that. I’m just not interested in it, I’d rather the reader decide her race/size/looks etc for themselves. Occasionally I lead everyone to my interpretation of what she looks like without thinking, but I’d rather the ...

This was another amazingly stimulating chapter! The humiliation in front of a classmate of hers and the potential for that student to take advantage of Candice is just to tantalizing for words. You outdid yourself here and my hat is off to your creativity.

I am glad to see that you haven't given ...

Nice twist on the usual "exposed in the doctor's office" stories. Kudos for your creativity.

Hooked6

What a great story! Though this is a logical end-point for a short story, I hope it doesn't end here as I like to see how our favorite model fares as her ordeal continues.

I must say I have read several of your works and your writing style is wonderful. You have a way with using words to create ...