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There is a part that could be considered a bit extreme but I have no idea how to tag this as such. This is the first time I'm posting anything, I wrote this a little while ago just letting the story flow as I typed. I had no intentions of sharing it with anybody but decided others might like it, Sor...

My humble opinion.
The concept of the story is great however it needed more build up. Sharing her emotions and events as she becomes more and more exposed.
You could also give more a detailed description of both her clothes and body as she is being exposed.

I look forward to seeing future stories.