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Chapter 2

"It is so good of you to come, Marisa."

"I didn't have much choice, Mr. Barlowe."

"Oh, there are always choices, my dear," said Mr. Barlowe as he closed the front door. "The very act of living, in fact, is making a ceaseless string of choices."

... Great, a philosophy lesson. Just ...

The Unraveling

Table of Contents

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20
Chapter ...

Becca was in shock as her mom dragged her out into the hallway. The exam room was also near the lobby; lucky for Becca, the door was closed, but she could still hear people talking in the busy lobby.

“I don’t know what's gotten into you today, but you are grounded!”

“Mom! Please! I’m naked! I ...

I'm grateful that people are interested enough in my story to be guessing where it's going. I don't want to give away the plotline in advance, but I like to drop hints. A number of people have picked up on the foreshadowing in the chapters I've posted so far.

In my original draft, when Mr. Barlowe ...

Chapter 10

"Well, I think that was a pretty successful trip to the mall," Aria said with a laugh, linking her arm through Ellie's. "Don't you agree, Ellie?"

Ellie nodded in agreement, a mischievous glint in her eye. "Oh, definitely. I mean, we got everything on our list, and then some. Plus ...

Chapter 11

Riley considered the options for a moment before deciding. "Truth," she said.

Ellie grinned. "Okay, Riley. We have a lot of embarrassing photos of you. Which one do you think would be the most mortifying to show to Lily?"

Riley swallowed hard, feeling a blush creep up her neck. "Um ...

Chapter 12

"Um... okay," Lily stammered, walking over to where Riley was still sitting on the bed. Riley stood up, her heart pounding as she felt Lily's hands on her shoulders, undoing the clasps of her dress. The material fell to the floor, revealing Riley's plain white bra and panties ...

Chapter 13

Their gazes locked, and for a moment, time seemed to stand still. The air between them crackled with tension, electric with the anticipation of what was to come. Claire watched them, a satisfied smile playing at the corners of her lips. Riley swallowed hard, feeling her heart race even ...

Lia’s knees felt weak as she walked down the hall. Of all the embarrassments and humiliations her family had put her through, her father’s may have been the worst. As embarrassed as she would have been to orgasm in front of him again, being denied an orgasm and begging him to finish might have been ...

Michelle pulled the phone from her ear just in time to see the terminated call fade to black. Staring in disbelief, she tried to process what had just happened.

Trevor has a girlfriend? He never meant to send me that message? He...wasn't picking me up to give me the best night of my life? HE HAS A ...