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This story is fictional, however, it is based upon an actual series of events. Location is Jacksonville, Florida, July, 1966.
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When I was 15-years-old my parents had to attend an out of state ...

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After a while, Aunt Jill told the girls that they could swim for another hour before going home. They jumped up and yelled, "Come on, Tommy, let's go back in the water!" I didn't know what to do as my penis under the towel was still rock hard. Nervously, I said to Aunt Jill ...

This is the story that The Smash Bet is based on.

The premise of The Smash Bet actually did happen, although the 'penalties' for losing were greatly exaggerated for the sake of fantasy. Aside from some minor details, the following story is completely true.

Five or six years ago, I matched a guy on ...

Here with another true story from the archives. Going to just throw a disclaimer out here that, with any story that's actually true, you should expect a 'mostly' true story. Certain details are going to be omitted/changed for obvious reasons like anonymity and the simple fact that real life is often ...

Very evocative, thanks for sharing!

When was this, roughly? 80s? 90s? The latchkey kid vibe is very strong.

Since your memory of her nipples seems pretty strong, I'm curious... Do you remember what her areaolas were like in terms of larger or smaller?

When was this, roughly? 80s? 90s? The latchkey kid vibe is very strong.

90s

Do you remember what her areaolas were like in terms of larger or smaller?

I'd say they were about the size of a half dollar (and yeah, I've used that comparison in a couple of my stories). Her nipples didn't seem ...

I had a very similar experience to this, except, it happened when I was 12. I grew up very close with my parents best friends two daughters. The oldest was just a year younger than me. Someone had taken a picture of her, standing in the living room, naked, while on the phone that was on the wall. I ...

To start ... I really love your stories. I read most of them previously on another site. Your a great author. The laundry mishap at the moment is wonderful.

These below notes are 100% my opinion and taste related so take them with a pinch of salt.

- In longer stories I much prefer escalation ...

I've said most of my feedback in PMs in the past, but basically you're a top tier writer for a variety of reasons. Your characterizations and situations are always well done.

My main disconnect is that I'm interested in adrenaline spikes and moments of high tension, where your stories usually focus ...

Hey, I just read over a couple of your stories. I was reading more to give feedback than pleasure -- the age range of these stories is young for me, but that's a matter of taste. My feedback is more about the writing and not the content.

To echo others here, I think your narration, story flow, and ...