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- Thu Dec 22, 2022 11:38 pm
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Kelly's Surprise Party (Complete)
A/N: This is a cute, silly story I wrote for BP, and she's given me her blessing to share it. :) ---- Part 1 K: Oh hey, TYLER. I wasn't expecting to see you here today. Oh, and Jennifer, too? Wow. I'm a little surprised, but I'm really glad to see you guys. J: Hey Kelly. :) Good to see you, too. T: ...
- Fri Dec 23, 2022 12:06 am
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Re: Kelly's Surprise Party
Part 2 K: Now hold on a minute, Tyler. You, okay, maybe, but I'm not sure Jennifer needs to see me naked... T: Jennifer doesn't mind. Jennifer, do you mind seeing Kelly naked? J: No. I would love to. T: See, she doesn't mind. Let's get that tank top off. J: Oooh, very nice. Nike sports bra. I bet yo...
- Fri Dec 23, 2022 12:41 am
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Re: Kelly's Surprise Party
T: How are the restraints, Kelly? I'm going for tight, but comfortable. K: I think they could be a little looser, actually. T: Oh, Kelly, you've tried that one before. But I have the memory of an elephant, and an elephant never forgets. J: I bet she wants to wriggle free and try to escape! T: Oh, de...
- Fri Dec 23, 2022 6:35 am
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Re: Kelly's Surprise Party
J: I love the taste of strawberries. K: My nipples do not taste like strawberries, Jennifer! J: How would you know? K: Okay, that's actually a good point... But it's still not true! J: Tyler, don't you think they taste like strawberries? K: Think very carefully about how you answer that, Tyler!!! T:...
- Fri Dec 23, 2022 4:22 pm
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Re: Kelly's Surprise Party (ch. 4 posted)
Part 5 T: Don't be mad, Jennifer. It's only fair. Kelly got tied up. Don't you want it to be fair? K: Yeah, don't you want it to be fair, Jennifer? J: It doesn't feel very fair from my perspective. Hey, Tyler, what do you say you let my arms down and we'll call it even? T: Yeah, not a chance. K: Don...
- Fri Dec 23, 2022 5:09 pm
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Re: Kelly's Surprise Party (Complete)
Here are some notes and backstory about Kelly's Surprise Party. I wrote this story as a response to a prompt: Kelly gets tied up and tickled just because. No games, bets, or coercion. Her friends just show up and decide to tickle her because she needs to be tickled, and that ended up being the premi...
- Sat Dec 24, 2022 9:04 am
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Re: Criticize my stories
To start ... I really love your stories. I read most of them previously on another site. Your a great author. The laundry mishap at the moment is wonderful. These below notes are 100% my opinion and taste related so take them with a pinch of salt. - In longer stories I much prefer escalation ... let...
- Sat Dec 24, 2022 2:57 pm
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Dare Me - The Lost Swimsuit Saga (new 12/24)
Dare Me - The Lost Swimsuit Saga (Part 4) A long line of taxis waited outside the airport to deliver tourists to their various vacation rentals. I gave our destination address to the one in front. The driver frowned at the address and asked me to confirm it. He said it wasn't a regular vacation spot...
- Sat Dec 24, 2022 7:40 pm
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Re: Criticize my stories
I've said most of my feedback in PMs in the past, but basically you're a top tier writer for a variety of reasons. Your characterizations and situations are always well done. My main disconnect is that I'm interested in adrenaline spikes and moments of high tension, where your stories usually focus ...
- Wed Dec 28, 2022 5:58 am
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Re: Winter Holiday Contest 2022: Snow Maiden's March
I added a neat banner in my signature for this story in the style that I did for the ROA contest, which I think I'm going to start doing for all of my stories from now on (always linking to the most recent). What drove me to do something like that for this particular story was the fact that this thi...