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by Executionus
Sun Aug 14, 2022 8:48 am
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Re: Trapped in the Shower -- Part 26 (Complete!)

Is this part meant to be Jennifer instead of Jessica? Damnit, I missed that one. I'll fix that now. So something about me that I don't think I've ever brought up before is that I have significant dyslexia that causes me to switch around certain words that fit certain criteria when I talk or write. ...
by Executionus
Sun Aug 14, 2022 3:37 pm
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Re: Trapped in the Shower -- Part 26 (Complete!)

That is interesting but understandable. I have my own problem, sort of similar, where when I am writing I will put adjectives and adverbs in the wrong order for a sentence. Especially in longer sentences. It's not until I go back to review what I have wrote that I notice my mistakes. As a quick exa...
by drtickle
Sun Aug 14, 2022 9:46 pm
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Re: My Best Friend's Stroker (Alternate Ending - Aug 13)

Great story, great endings, both of them. Although I'm with Executionus her, I liked the second one better, too. I like that they both ended with a "happily ever after" in the end.

Keep it up, and keep those characters tickled of course ;-)
by drtickle
Mon Aug 15, 2022 10:04 pm
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Re: My Best Friend's Stroker (Alternate Ending - Aug 13)

Thanks drtickle! Besides the obvious, what was your favorite part of the story? I really like the concept of horny boys getting deeper into trouble just because of their sexual lust and frustration. So the part where Dale hands himself over is hot. And CFNM with a bunch of girls mixed with tickling...
by Executionus
Mon Aug 15, 2022 10:32 pm
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Re: My Best Friend's Stroker (Alternate Ending - Aug 13)

Besides the obvious, what was your favorite part of the story? I'd have to vote for the way that Crystal revealed Dale to Jo and Marcy, being meticulous in her control of all three of them and making all three sweat with anticipation while the blind girls unknowingly stood in front of a naked guy o...
by Executionus
Tue Aug 16, 2022 4:44 am
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Re: My Best Friend's Stroker (Alternate Ending - Aug 13)

Rereading some of 'Trapped in the Shower' I feel like I unconsciously put some of Lisa into Marcy :lol: I hope you don't mind. I don't mind. I prefer audience members in these stories who are lost in lust from what they are seeing as opposed to ones who are stoic or respond with just mockery. Marcy...
by GeekGuy
Wed Aug 17, 2022 3:25 am
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Re: My Best Friend's Stroker (Alternate Ending - Aug 13)

i loved the story both endings were cool. idk what one I like better. at the risk of sounding greedy could there be an epilogue or part 2 telling john and wendy that they are now a thing, hearing about john and wendy's date, maybe a double date?
by jastes22
Wed Aug 17, 2022 4:41 am
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The Slumber Party War: Part 3 - Preemptive Strike

“How was he?” Jade asked. I blushed. “He was actually really sweet. We’re going out again soon.” “I’m glad!” Jade said. “Seems like you’re really taking to California.” I blushed. Rather than trying to respond, I excised myself to refill the snack bowls. All the girls were tense, like waiting for a ...
by GeekGuy
Wed Aug 17, 2022 4:56 pm
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Re: My Best Friend's Stroker (Alternate Ending - Aug 13)

i loved the story both endings were cool. idk what one I like better. at the risk of sounding greedy could there be an epilogue or part 2 telling john and wendy that they are now a thing, hearing about john and wendy's date, maybe a double date? I see you are not familiar with my writing. Practical...
by jastes22
Fri Aug 19, 2022 12:53 pm
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The Slumber Party War: Part 4 - Retaliation

“Have you guys done it yet?” I blushed. “I’m not that kind of girl,” I said. “I’m kind of shy when it comes to that.” Jade grinned. “Didn’t seem like it last week.” I grimaced, and tried to focus my mind on the sound of the falling rain rather than think about the embarrassment that had ensued. Unli...