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by superevil7
Mon Jan 23, 2023 10:04 pm
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Re: The Curse (Part 2 posted 1/23)

Nice premise. I'm guessing you have the full reveal planned for Mark's pool party, but might I suggest a chapter about Louise having to be bottomless before then. Also, something in me is really hoping for Mark to be the one responsible for Louise's problems. Sometimes I wish we got more boys purpos...
by superevil7
Tue Jan 24, 2023 8:52 pm
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Re: Mickey’s Day At The Stables

This is a great start! Personally I really like it when a girl is naked in front of an authority figure as you say. I feel like it heightens her embarrassment especially if it's someone she is familiar with and sees often. I also love the "there's no time to waste" angle that the man is u...
by superevil7
Thu Jan 26, 2023 7:22 pm
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Re: The Curse (Part 3 posted 1/26)

What a wonderful chapter! Very interesting that Mark and her friend Hailee would team up to prank Louise like that. I have a pretty good feeling that I might just be correct about Mark ;) Sorry, no spoilers. I love when a girl can't control herself and ends up getting excited despite her embarrassme...
by superevil7
Tue Jan 31, 2023 2:11 pm
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Re: The Curse (Part 4 Posted 1/30)

Excellent and exciting chapter Jastes! Love the reveal of Mark being behind it all. *Chef's Kiss* Louise being turn on by every thing, and being taunted about it by Hailee, and then the blindfolded tickling, all just icing on the cake at this point. And you left a hint of there being more with Mark ...
by superevil7
Wed Feb 01, 2023 3:19 pm
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Re: The New Rules (Chapter 33 - Jan 08)

Sorry for the late replies. I had meant to reply to each of you, but then real life things got in the way. I hope you understand. Great work so far. You caught the element of how differently every girl feels about masturbating in front of people she knows and has to see everyday. God job! Waiting fo...
by superevil7
Wed Feb 01, 2023 11:09 pm
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Re: The New Rules (Chapter 33 - Jan 08)

Loving the story so far. I just finished rereading The Smartwatch and The New Rules, so the latest chapter came at an opportune time. The characters are richly drawn and come across as real people. I was glad to see the mothers get involved in the action. Lots of fun there. Sorry WingDing, didn't m...
by superevil7
Sun Feb 05, 2023 1:45 am
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BTFW - Ronnie's Big Reveal

Part 1 There once was a girl named Ronnie, that everyone thought was as sweet as could be. All of her friends and coworkers thought she was the most kind and caring person they had ever met. But Ronnie had a little secret. She enjoyed writing erotic fiction. Ronnie was a little humiliation slut. Sh...
by superevil7
Sun Feb 05, 2023 2:10 am
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Re: BTFW - Ronnie's Big Reveal

Part 2 By the time Ronnie had booted up her computer the next morning, she had already received another message from SuperEvil. SuperEvil: Good morning, Ronnie. It seems you’ve been a very naughty girl. DameBella: What? What do you mean? My new story? SuperEvil: No. Though I really enjoyed it. Supe...
by superevil7
Sun Feb 05, 2023 2:18 am
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Re: BTFW - Ronnie's Big Reveal

Part 3 Ronnie could only sit there and worry, wondering what this creep was going to make her do now. SuperEvil: So I’ve seen your tits, but I think it’s time I got to see the rest of you. DameBella: No way! SuperEvil: Ronnie, why must we go through this song and dance every single time? You know y...
by superevil7
Sun Feb 05, 2023 2:33 am
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BTFW - DameBella's Big Reveal

Ladies and gentlemen, I'm sure you all know what we are here for. I have recently come into possession of the nude photos of one of our newest up and coming authors. Vote yes if you want me to reveal DameBella to the world! In 24 hours time this poll will be closed and the results will be tallied. I...