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imanewb wrote: ↑Fri Nov 10, 2023 1:00 am

jastes22 wrote: ↑Thu Nov 09, 2023 7:13 pm Thank you!

Damn, saw you'd replied and there I was hoping we were about to find out who was at the door! Curses!

You and me both! Haha

Nicely written. I can't wait to see what Lindsey will have her do. I sure hope the mysterious visitor doesn't say too much to give herself away. I love how you have maintained the mystery surrounding the guest's identity. That alone would drive Taylor crazy - especially of she thinks it might be som...

Very nicely written, liking the intrigue of the 'maybe known' interloper, just wondering how long until Taylor inevitably snaps.... or if she'll wait to be 'utterly destroyed' and either seek revenge/slash her wrists/run away/or something else.

jastes22 wrote: ↑Sun Nov 12, 2023 12:48 pm If anyone has a preference as to who figures out what, please let me know!

Well, to maintain internal consistency, the unknown visitor figuring out who she is whilst Taylor remains in the dark (at least initially) would be the way to keep up the pressure.

Follow up thought, might a better 'self-inflicted' torture on our unhappy victim be to 'snap', yank off her mask (revealing her own identity), only to find the visitor and the boys (keeping their identities secret from the visitor) disguised, and then be forced to either leave naked (leaving behind ...

What a clever idea - a game! With significant risks I might add. I love it!

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Loved the game and the clues. Most interested to see whether the mystery guest can guess who it is or is our "maid" going to be left torturing herself trying to figure out who her classmate is. Well written. Try not to let all the nit-picking commentary distract you from your writing. You ...

I'm going to 'agree to disagree' on whether 'tis 'nit-picking' - I've said before, if constructive criticism isn't wanted, all an author has to do is say so - I felt it a better option than a simple downvote (as the only alternative for expressing an opinion) but will probably end up doing that ins...

My apologies to the few folks who were so patient and supportive with my last story, "A Small Price to Pay". Some people are able to just write and write, and the well just never seems to run dry (I'm looking at you, NeverDoubted!) I, unfortunately, hit long stretches where the idea just ...

So glad this is back.