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by Fred Key
Fri Jun 02, 2023 2:20 pm
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Re: The Tutor (new post 5/31)

Patient people, rejoice! The good stuff has arrived.

I gave each $100 in fives and tens, and dealt each five cards.The first few hands were uneventful. Neither girl was a particularly experienced poker player, and both were fairly nervous, so the bets were small at first. Slowly, however, as the ...
by Fred Key
Mon Jun 05, 2023 4:28 am
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Re: The Tutor (new post 6/2)

Not too far off, but let's not get ahead of ourselves just yet....

The Tutor, continued

"Wait a minute!" I objected. "The deal was that she would strip if she was the first to be put into a draw situation. She's paid in full."

"The bet was for the consequences for whoever lost first," insisted ...
by Fred Key
Tue Jun 06, 2023 12:58 am
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Re: The Tutor (new post 6/4)

I shook my head. "I think you guys have had enough practice for one day, don't you?"

Jessica surprised me by objecting loudly. "No way! I want a shot at getting even with Tara for that egg thing. How could you even consider putting that in the game? And I still owe her for the ice, too."

I looked ...
by Fred Key
Wed Jun 07, 2023 6:28 pm
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Re: The Tutor (new post 6/7)

I took the slip from Jess and opened it, then read it aloud. CLOSE YOUR EYES. REACH INTO THE FRIDGE. WHATEVER YOU PULL OUT GOES DOWN THE FRONT OF YOUR TOPMOST PIECE OF CLOTHING.

Again, I looked over at Tara. "Another messy penalty? I thought you said you thought they were childish." She shook her ...
by Fred Key
Thu Jun 15, 2023 4:19 pm
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A Small Price To Pay (Poll-what happens next?)

Thank you all for the kind welcome and the support for "The Tutor". I know it had less ENF and more other to it than many people might prefer, but it wasn't written for this site originally, and I wanted to know a little more about how my particular type of storytelling would be received here ...
by Fred Key
Fri Jun 16, 2023 4:48 pm
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 2 6/16)

Chapter 2 - Reversal of Fortune

The Truth or Dare game had gone pretty much as Ryan had hoped. It was clear from early on that the girls were ganging up on him, as he was the recipient of almost every other question or dare. Ryan had decided that the right way to play it was to be “reluctant” about ...
by Fred Key
Tue Jun 20, 2023 5:42 am
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 2 6/16))

Chapter 3 - The pain you know

Sarah was still moaning “OW! OW! OH!” and desperately rubbing her flaming backside a minute after Ryan had let her up from his lap. Her pajama pants and pink panties were still in a puddle around her ankles, and the only concession she made to modesty was to turn away ...
by Fred Key
Wed Jun 21, 2023 9:30 pm
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 3 6/20))

Chapter 4 - Strength can be a Weakness

Jessica had grown up as an Army brat, and had moved many times over the years. She had no problems making friends with her winning smile and upbeat nature, and since she wasn’t the sort of girl who was interested in makeup and attracting attention, the cliques ...
by Fred Key
Thu Jun 22, 2023 7:34 pm
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Re: Behind Her Eyes (Complete)

This was very well done. I appreciate the senses being used as focal points for each section, and while
I would have loved to see a little more of this world you created, the ENF portion is the focus here and it was executed nicely. Zoe’s moments of panic were great!
by Fred Key
Tue Jun 27, 2023 12:00 am
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 4 posted 6/21, plus author note)

Ch. 5 - Surprises

Although Annie was the tallest of the girls, she was still a good 2 inches shorter than Ryan. Even so, they were closer to eye level than he was with any of the others. Her eyes were already brimming with tears.

“Please, Ryan,” she begged. “I know you’re going to…to spank me…but ...