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I've been reading this on the Naked Fiction storyboard and commenting there, but reserving my full comments until the whole thing is finished, but I'm liking it so far.

Hello everyone, I'm fairly new here but a long-time lurker from the ASN days, if that gives me any more standing to initiate a contest. ;) I don't consider myself a great writer of erotic stories - I have good ideas but can't really finish them - and more importantly can never get off to my own stor...

Hi FinchAgent, thanks for your questions. For clarification: Protag intentionally takes off her high-heels to walk more comfortably and/or her sweater because it's hot. Yes, that's fine. Protag changes her blouse but gets interrupted between taking the old one off and putting the new one on, and has...

Got to be honest, after getting caught by the professor in the last chapter I didn’t expect things to get resolved so smoothly. I’m looking forward to the next update. I’m also quite curious as to how Lisa will end up breaking her curse? I’m assuming that she’s going to need to make peace with the w...

I see we've taken some more time talking about this contest than actually writing for it!

Given everything, I'll extend the deadline till the end of February.

Great story, really enjoyed this one!

A lovely story

Hello, all! My name is Fred. I’ve been hovering around this board for several months now, enjoying the stories. I haven’t shared my own work yet, though, and I have a story that I posted elsewhere long ago that I think is good enough to share. I don’t take that lightly in the company of writers lik...

This was quite well-written! Nice job with the dialogue between Zoe and Yvain, which was quite believable. The situation is a nice twist on the dystopian, and the “it’s the break we’ve been waiting for” moment at the end is perfectly on form for this genre.

Looking forward to more!

"Let's try another example. Would you risk a wedgie?" "A wedgie? You mean, like, my underwear?" "Yep. A big fat wedgie. Would you risk getting one from me?" "For twenty dollars? What would the odds be?" "Two in ten again?" She thought about it for a ...