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- Sun Jan 14, 2024 7:51 pm
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Re: The Blinds
Thank you all so much for the feedback, I took your suggestions and added italics for the text conversation and made it clear she was in highschool. I hope you all like chapter 2, I had fun writing it. Please continue giving feedback on the writing, I thrive on both positive and negative feedback. T...
- Fri Jan 19, 2024 2:14 am
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Re: The Blinds
I know this chapter is pretty tame with a lot of set up, I promise it ramps up soon, thanks again for all your messages and thumbs ups! Chapter 3 – The Walk Emma closed her door and collapsed onto the ground, absolutely drenched in both water and sweat. “I cannot believe I just did that,” she whispe...
- Sat Jan 27, 2024 4:51 am
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Chapters 4 & 5. 1/27/24
Chapter 4 - The pool Emma awoke the next morning to her father knocking on her door. Groaning when she heard the noise, unable to believe she was already awake. Her late-night escapades were still fresh in her mind, “I could swear I fell asleep 10 seconds ago,” she thought through the morning haze. ...
- Sat Jan 27, 2024 5:00 am
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Re: The Blinds - update chapters 4 & 5. 1/27/24
Chapter 5 - Beauty Sleep When Emma walked into the house the first thing she did was make a cup of coffee. Her parent’s looked at her like she was crazy, “You’re having coffee at 6pm? You’ll be up all night!” her mother said. “You have no idea,” mumbled Emma under her breath. “The sun took more out ...
- Fri Mar 01, 2024 7:15 pm
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Re: A Tangled Web
BEN Bailey was out late when our parents were visiting one of their friends out of state. It’s not like her to break her curfew – even when my parents aren’t home. But tonight, our back door squeaked open at 3:37 AM, waking me up. I feigned sleeping when I heard her tip-toeing up the stairs. Tap………...
- Sat Mar 09, 2024 11:07 pm
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Update - 3/9/24 - School Bus Strip
Chapter 6 - School Bus Strip After a long, hot soak in the tub, Emma began to relax and clear her mind of the craziest few hours of her life. She walked into her room and collapsed on the bed, falling asleep within seconds. Emma was startled awake as someone was shaking her saying, “Emma wake up alr...
- Fri Mar 15, 2024 1:44 pm
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Re: A Tangled Web
Thanks for the high praise Pattareth! And all the others who have commented! BAILEY Talk about a roller coaster of a night. Highest of highs and lowest of lows. I knew when the group changed up that Leslie’s house was not going to be fun. But Craig was still there and we were getting along so well e...
- Fri Mar 15, 2024 1:56 pm
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Re: A Tangled Web
BEN I am gonna bang my sister! Okay, probably not, but she let me see her naked and I even got to touch her pussy. I’m almost positive Landon Miller never got to do that, otherwise, why would he have gotten so frustrated with her? Bailey was as furious as I’ve ever seen her when I did it, but has c...
- Sat Mar 30, 2024 12:42 am
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued
Chapter 7 It was a bright, sunny morning as Emma walked to the bus stop on her second day of school, but to her it felt as if a bleak, dark cloud was overhead. She spent most of the walk trying to guess what her tormentor, Claire, had in store for her while reliving the previous day’s activities. “I...
- Wed Apr 03, 2024 6:12 pm
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Re: A Tangled Web
BEN It had been a full month since Bailey allowed me to see her. A full month of me lying low, ignoring when she turns the on shower, and re-watching the footage I’ve already saved. But it’s not the same. There’s just no comparison to capturing a new video or, better yet, seeing Bailey in person. A...