Pantsing and Stripping Forums

Wow! Didn't expect the mass nudity. Nor spending the night with Ada. Now makes me wonder what they got up to.

On the other hand, I am extremely novice at all of this. I never even took a creative writing class in school and would likely have failed it if I had. I doubt too many people here ever took any creative writing classes. Honestly, my English classes were useless, and in hindsight I find myself appa...

Ooh, I'm intrigued to find out what the new direction is.
I prefer darker stories myself.

I'm enjoying the story and the additional explanations as well. The medical world and the brain is so complicated, and you're making it easy to read. It's a different story from the others I've read, in other words it's pleasantly interesting.

It was definitely interesting, that's for sure. The way that the "ok" programming glitched when faced with an absurdly not-ok situation was a very unique concept. It was an understated warping, but still clearly the case. I wouldn't call the story all that sexy though, mostly because the d...

It was certainly abusive. My only defense is that you inspired me to try to ramp up the tension in the story, and while I was working on that the story sort of took a dark turn. While I'm glad to be an inspiration, darkness is not the same thing as tension (and can often break the tension). My comm...

Sorry, once the control element came to the fore, I lost interest. I prefer stories where the protagonist gets to enjoy nudity. Someone once described my stories as CNF - Confident Nude Female.

I loved the story and I didn't think it abusive at all. It was the perfect combination of humiliation, pet play fetish and recovery. I found the entire plot most enjoyable. Not every story will please all readers as everyone has his/her own tastes. Don't stress over the criticism of the story being ...

The part I think was the best part was when she was made to take the 3 large black trash bags full of her clothes to the curb and then watch the garbage truck take them away, without even realizing at the time they were all her clothes until it was too late when she went up to her room and then real...

I doubt I’ll do another domination story soon . . . Aww . . . that's a shame as you definitely have a talent for writing stories containing mischief and domination (what some would call the "dark stories," which I feel that label does the genre a disservice.) Over at the nficstoryboard.co...