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It was certainly abusive. My only defense is that you inspired me to try to ramp up the tension in the story, and while I was working on that the story sort of took a dark turn.


While I'm glad to be an inspiration, darkness is not the same thing as tension (and can often break the tension ...

Sorry, once the control element came to the fore, I lost interest. I prefer stories where the protagonist gets to enjoy nudity. Someone once described my stories as CNF - Confident Nude Female.

I loved the story and I didn't think it abusive at all. It was the perfect combination of humiliation, pet play fetish and recovery. I found the entire plot most enjoyable. Not every story will please all readers as everyone has his/her own tastes.

Don't stress over the criticism of the story ...

The part I think was the best part was when she was made to take the 3 large black trash bags full of her clothes to the curb and then watch the garbage truck take them away, without even realizing at the time they were all her clothes until it was too late when she went up to her room and then ...

I doubt I’ll do another domination story soon . . .


Aww . . . that's a shame as you definitely have a talent for writing stories containing mischief and domination (what some would call the "dark stories," which I feel that label does the genre a disservice.) Over at the nficstoryboard.com ...

I want it known that I wouldn't call dominance a "dark" story at all for this community. That's just par for the course. My darkest ENF story on here involved murder, maiming, and being raped by a ghost lol.

What made this particular story darker than most was the constant strangling, beating ...

Executionus wrote: Mon Apr 04, 2022 9:06 pm a basketball of ecstasy.

Fantastic.

Principal Harding sat at his desk, staring at the gorgeous new student sitting opposite. As the principal at Benedictine Prep, an elite coed high school in Washington D.C., Principal Harding generally tried to avoid leering at the female students. However, this new student was different. Despite her ...

Right now it’s 11 people. I’m also going to hard cap at 16 because otherwise we’ll be here for a while. I also plan to hace some parts that will kind of speed along the brackets. I have kind of an idea of the direction of everything but who knows what’ll happen when shit happens. Either way I’ll ...

Suffice to say that Tabitha & Heidi did get into trouble at the end of the story. They were all arrested and between social media postings and neighbors testifying, those two certainly got punished for their deeds.


I understand all that but should do a follow-up chapter, like how was their time ...