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What an intense story your have managed to create! I am loving every chapter so far. Your pacing, on balance is quite good, though if I am honest, I would love to see you spend a wee bit more time (and details) on the embarrassing situations Annie/Sophie finds herself in rather just just describing ...

Your argument for stuff moving a bit too quickly in the original falls flat when it feels the same here. Sure you mentioned her taking taking baby steps over a few days but when reading fast one wooshes past those few paragraphs so it is just as quick, Ah, I have the joy of having a short attention...

As it turns out, more people have reached out complimenting the first Becca chapter and asking for followup there than have engaged on all of my previous stories combined in the three and a half years I've been publishing. Because of this, I've been stockpiling ideas and thinking about the world con...

enjoyed both your stories. Hope you complete the second one soon.

Hello, It's a tough call, but why not combine the two ideas to create a more complex and nuanced story, exploring the protagonist's dilemmas with his therapist's methods while evolving into the discovery of his inner power and sexuality? Readers might enjoy a story that blends elements of benevolenc...

I've been enjoying this sequel. I like the idea of a girl being comfortable naked in public as long as she can't see her own body - it's a fascinating and erotic idea. I especially like Annie's reaction to men giving her... erotic complements(?). But at its core, I just love the dichotomy of Annie f...

For a different perspective many readers like it when girls take advantage of other girls and don't consider that "horrific" at all. Just saying there are many perceptions of what fantasies people enjoy and what they don't. To each his own. I say let the author write what interests them wh...

Glad you are continuing the story and keeping it very entertaining.

hopefully Annie comes back and they can figure out what is wrong with her.

Been awhile are you coming back?