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by edithdick
Tue Oct 17, 2023 11:40 am
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Re: Looking for story ideas

Does anyone remember the pilot episode of Malcolm in the Middle? From memory i think it went something like: The mom was running around in the morning getting everything ready as her kids were getting off to school, and her husband off to work. Breakfast, laundry, lunches etc. plus getting herself r...
by edithdick
Fri Oct 20, 2023 10:21 pm
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 12 Posted

She’s the kind of girl who climbed the ladder of success wrong by wrong. – Mae West More Therapy - Chapter 12 “Sophie! Heel!” Dr. Crowe commanded for at least the 100th time. That and, “Sophie, stop.” Or “Sophie, walk.” We had been walking for at least an hour. Twelve blocks doesn’t sound like that...
by edithdick
Sat Oct 21, 2023 3:41 pm
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 12 Posted

hopefully Annie comes back and they can figure out what is wrong with her. Without spoiling anything, I can at least promise you that this is not being narrated from beyond the grave. So Annie will return to control at some point in the story. Also, as I have mentioned on a different thread in the ...
by edithdick
Sun Oct 22, 2023 9:27 pm
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 13 Posted

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This chapter was intentionally deleted, as I have decided to go a different direction for the remainder of the story. The new Chapter 13 is posted below.
by edithdick
Mon Apr 15, 2024 9:50 pm
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Re: A Matter of Perspective - Male Narration / Point of View

In Extreme therapy, I told the story in the first chapter from Annie’s PoV, but the second chapter was a retelling of the same events from her brother Craig’s viewpoint. Here is a link to that chapter:

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by edithdick
Thu Apr 18, 2024 1:14 pm
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Re: Lazy sister

Here is one idea you can take or leave. Zoey has no place to go. She spends the next few days living in the woods, secretly sneaking into neighbors yards to drink from the hose and steal vegetables from their garden. In the evening she goes back to her sister’s house to beg forgiveness, but Brittney...
by edithdick
Sat Apr 20, 2024 9:06 pm
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 13 Posted

NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR: I had to rewrite this chapter. I needed to change the direction of the story a bit from where I was taking it in the original version. More chapters are on the way. ****************************************************************************************************************...
by edithdick
Sat Apr 20, 2024 10:34 pm
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Re: Finishing Stories

Truth be told, I mostly write here because I want to learn to be a better writer. What I love about this board is that I get a lot of great feedback from the stories I post. With the end goal of being a better writer, I need to learn how to finish stories. Writing a lot of good chapters that don't h...
by edithdick
Sun Apr 21, 2024 2:39 pm
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Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 14 Posted

Who else thinks we should be allowed to bring our dogs to school? - found on Pinterest More Therapy - Chapter 14 It was mid-morning when we walked out of the facility. This was the first time in weeks that I had felt sunlight on my skin. I can’t say that Sophie cared about the warmth of the sun as ...
by edithdick
Tue Apr 23, 2024 4:52 am
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Re: Wendi Babysits the Twins

litrob2000 wrote: Tue Apr 23, 2024 1:48 am I'd really prefer NOT to read any more stories involving rape, with any number of rapists and at any age. Full Stop.
I think that ‘rape’ definitely falls into the “Extreme content “ category and should be clearly labeled as such, per the site guidelines.