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by Trundle
Tue May 30, 2023 7:30 pm
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Re: Hard Time at the Beach

Wonderful stuff. I love the idea of Inga and Eleni whispering to each other about Jakub and he is aware of it. Are they talking about his ejaculation? Did they enjoy it? I like the idea of Jakub being a bit paranoid about it. Well after a few chapters of his penis behaving itself it's nice to see it...
by Trundle
Thu Jun 01, 2023 8:07 pm
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Re: It's In the Script

Great chapter. It's nice after saying Stian needed to get in better shape before, that Miss Bartlette now gave Stian loads of compliments about his looks and penis, I'm sure as embarrassed as Stian is he must have enjoyed that. Meat stick pounding his tummy like a drum :lol: Love the idea Stian may ...
by Trundle
Sat Jun 03, 2023 10:35 pm
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Re: Hard Time at the Beach

I love how we get more backstory with Jakub and also an insight into how he's felt all day, the different levels of embarrassment he's felt at various stages. Great attention to detail, builds the characters up more while also ramping up the tension before Jakub has to stand up and reveal his erecti...
by Trundle
Mon Jun 05, 2023 5:12 pm
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Re: The Strange Girl in Apartment 469

Amazing how you manage to be so creative with so many different stories!

A boy being encouraged to put on girls clothing is a very intriguing concept, makes me wonder how he's going to end up losing those clothes, hopefully it's in public...
by Trundle
Mon Jun 05, 2023 8:28 pm
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Re: The Strange Girl in Apartment 469

So often I will think your story is going one way only to find out it's going in a direction I never guessed. Sometimes I think when writers do that it doesn't work, they try to surprise the readers and sometimes it ends up not making sense but you always make sense with yours, it may go in unusual ...
by Trundle
Tue Jun 06, 2023 6:08 pm
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Re: It's In the Script

"Dinner and a Show" :lol:

Maybe Stian should think about charging for people to watch? He could make some decent money I bet

No idea what the game will be with the cheese involved, but I can't wait to find out.
by Trundle
Mon Jun 12, 2023 7:48 pm
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Re: Abducted

Fantastic start, love the idea of them still being bath buddies , Alex starting to get erections and his sister seeming to sneakily enjoy making him erect. Very interesting.

Lot of potential for possible humiliation during his choir singing...
by Trundle
Thu Jun 15, 2023 6:13 pm
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Re: Abducted

Always a joy to see you've written something Teenfan.

A camping trip with two little monsters sounds like a recipe for disaster for poor Alex.
by Trundle
Fri Jun 16, 2023 7:30 pm
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Re: Abducted

I usually prefer it when it's one boy surrounded by a ton of girls who seem to relish getting him naked, so it's unusual for the story to contain more boys than girls but of course I trust you TeenFan to write a great story. Very intrigued to see where the Abducted part comes into this. Very interes...
by Trundle
Mon Jun 19, 2023 6:54 pm
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Re: Hard Time at the Beach

So pleased to see another chapter of this amazing story. It just keeps getting better and better, I thought maybe the slow dance to Foreigner would cause poor Jakub to explode again but luckily for him he managed to hold on, maybe doing it earlier on the beach helped him avoid it this time. Maybe we...