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by Trundle
Mon Nov 20, 2023 11:53 pm
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Re: It's In the Script: New Nov. 20

The film script just seems better and better! Really funny to imagine Stians reaction as he's reading the script with that scene in, "Bananas and Boner juice" He must be furious and blushing a deep red knowing what he has to film, but what can he do? He's trapped with no way out. I really ...
by Trundle
Tue Nov 21, 2023 7:04 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 21)

As always, total excitement and joy to see a new chapter posted. I wasn't expecting another one today so it was a wonderful surprise. Loved the opening scene with Seth and Mrs Masters, Obedience is the perfect word to describe how she has manipulated him. He can't even bear to look her in the face, ...
by Trundle
Tue Nov 21, 2023 7:15 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 21)

If I'd had a million guesses of what would happen I never would have guessed that :D I try to be creative, and not too predictable. It's impossible not to play into some of the many tropes/clichés of this genre but I try my best to keep it fresh :lol: I think it's inevitable to use some of the clas...
by Trundle
Tue Nov 21, 2023 7:29 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 20)

:D I have encountered similar problems, though my experience with AI generated art is very limited. I just can't with the extra fingers and teeth half the time. After almost an hour the above photo is the best one I could get of girls laughing and looking up at Seth. I also tried to have one of the...
by Trundle
Fri Nov 24, 2023 12:53 am
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Re: The Initiation Ordeal_New Nov 23

Oh man I forgot about this story, it's fantastic! Cannot wait to see what made Kai finally blow his load, it's around the swimming pool and the girls are involved? Hmm I wonder how it could happen, it has to be as embarrassing as possible hopefully. Maybe he accidentally rips his swimming shorts or ...
by Trundle
Sun Nov 26, 2023 5:33 pm
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Re: The Initiation Ordeal_New Nov 25

Another incredibly entertaining chapter.

Things are really building now, I wonder if it's during the beach volleyball that Kai explodes?

Very interesting that so many of your stories are inspired by films. Think that's a great way to inspire creativity.
by Trundle
Wed Nov 29, 2023 2:41 am
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 28)

Great to see you back writing! Hope you continue to improve and get back to full health as soon as possible. Intriguing latest chapter, I actually really liked it was a little more low key than the last chapter. I know a chapter where Seth is forced to display his erection in front of his basketball...
by Trundle
Wed Nov 29, 2023 2:45 am
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Re: It's In the Script: New Nov. 28

Brilliant latest chapter. Always enjoy when we get to see into the mind of the characters and we can hear their inner monologues. Stian wondering why he got the job in the first place was great, do we actually know if the boy is a good actor? I reckon it was his penis and balls that sealed the deal....
by Trundle
Thu Nov 30, 2023 12:42 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 29)

Short but very sweet latest chapter. Nice to get a little flashback scene, as we see Mrs Masters arranging things that were yet to come at that point. If only Seth knew as he stood in the doorway what was about to happen to him over the coming days. I really liked this technique, showing us a previo...
by Trundle
Fri Dec 01, 2023 1:06 am
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 29)

I understand people having reservations about it but the butt plug stuff is fine with me I think. Especially with it being remote controlled and also as you said, Seth starting to take a liking to that. As much as he must try and deny he enjoys it to himself, there's plenty of evidence he likes it :D