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Excellent story so far! I'm so glad to see you active again after all this time, since you're one of the true elites. Your niche has always been barely-covered people walking the tightrope between exposure and coverage and you do it so well.

I just have to comment that you shouldn't be insecure ...

knew she was naked from the off, but since this is enf you're kind of expecting the girl to be naked at some point whether beginning middle or end. liked the build up like to see where it leads, but interesting start.

Also the fear of getting naked as hostage can be a better idea for your next story.



I would really have to think about the hostage angle for a bit. I won’t write a rape story, so I’ll need to figure out a reason that the hostages would be forced to get naked.


I am not advocating for or ...

To add to that, given the board's raison d'être, it would be a bigger surprise if she was fully clothed the whole time.

Point taken. A naked girl is hardly a twist on this board

Sorry, once the control element came to the fore, I lost interest. I prefer stories where the protagonist gets to enjoy nudity. Someone once described my stories as CNF - Confident Nude Female.

I also like the meta joke that we’re giving suggestions, much like the suggestion box.


Great ideas! I think I’m going to stop commenting on them so I don’t spoil what I have planned. But as you noted, the story will unfold as a suggestion box. I’ll try to only use ideas that are suggested in ...

The swimsuit day idea sounds like a good place to start. Perhaps one female manager (Joanna) and one male manager, as of course you can't descriminate these days.

Easy to agree to when they see the suggestion, since it's not too bad and probably better than some of the alternatives. If only they ...

Oops, looks like this is going to be a three-parter rather than a two-parter. Hope you enjoy the continuation!

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PART TWO

The boogie-board boys could undoubtedly see that I was looking at them, but this ...

DrWhoFanJ wrote: Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:15 am If I may make a prediction about the future journey of this story...

Oh. Jeez...

I almost want to ask you to delete that comment....

Congratulations, that is more or less exactly how the finale of this story was going to eventuate!

Uhh....

Wow. I'm at a loss for words...