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I'm glad you notice the little things, Heh, that's probably a side effect of the fact that story writing across multiple genres has been my biggest hobby since I was in kindergarten. Deeper elements of stories, symbolism, foreshadowing, and all of that English class stuff is just flowing through my...

Fixing the paragraphs and formatting is a big must for sure. The overall setup is great so far, although the dialogue could probably be worked to not seem quite as fake. You should also expand a little bit on the individual characters of Scarlet and John some, since right now they are little more th...

mikewozere wrote: ↑Thu Aug 05, 2021 9:23 pm Your 24 y/o sister is 6' 9" ? Wow!

Well that just reminded me of this classic movie scene.


Also it's an interesting concept to switch the two and how many different literal applications can be made from that statement. It'll be fun to see how that plays out.

Yeah sorry about that. Somehow I missed that detail reading through originally (and sounds like everybody did too). It's probably because it was only mentioned the one time. That's precisely why I have a tendency to frequently restate plot-relevant details as long as they continue to be in use.

Well the tie for first was broken at last, and Lady Lucia has now succeeded in winning her own contest. That deserves like a Royce Gracie award or something for the badassery of it (UFC 1 reference). Congrats! This turned out to be a very fun contest overall with the multiple different layers to it ...

I remember these from waaaaay back in the day. This should be amusing. Although it occurs to me that newer readers won't know exactly how the Program works in the Karen Wagner shared universe. If you're wanting to follow in the original Naked in School Program (often shortened to just "the Prog...

Great story! You should probably edit the title of the post to begin with KWC so that it will be included in the Karen Wagner Naked in School contest.

***Having reached 20 entrants with not all that much time left, I've decided to end submissions and use those 20 for the contest since it'll be a smooth round number. This sign-up is closed now. Good luck to everyone who entered! https://i.imgur.com/r5Rq02K.png I have decided that it is finally tim...

Here is the list of all characters currently entered into the Thirst Games 2. I will edit this post whenever I get a new one submitted to me. Cop -- Executionus Video Blogger -- Humilatron Horse Jockey -- PBQ Waitress -- Nikolai Author -- Skillbox Photographer -- JohnJacobs Teacher -- ENFLover Styli...

Haha, I'm loving that this contest has inadvertently been pushing lurkers to make accounts in order to join the fun. All of the characters I've been getting so far have been excellent, with most of them leaning HEAVY into their gimmicks for added entertainment value. I've worked around with a few of...