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by Executionus
Sat Dec 17, 2022 10:54 pm
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Winter Holiday Contest 2022: Snow Maiden's March

Using a laptop that's probably as old as half of the protagonists on this forum, I was finally able to type up my entry for this contest. Since my original event plan for this December got postponed until next year, this little tale serves as an origin story for Snegurochka (pronounced Sneh-gu-row-c...
by Executionus
Sat Dec 17, 2022 10:56 pm
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Winter Holiday Contest 2022: Snow Maiden's March

The year was 1934. Krampus walked his warped body into Santa's living room, burlap sack over his shoulder. The sack was quickly dumped on the floor to reveal a beautiful platinum-blonde teenage girl in a blue coat. Her hair was long and almost white in color. Her eyes were an icy light blue. It was ...
by Executionus
Sat Dec 24, 2022 7:40 pm
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Re: Criticize my stories

I've said most of my feedback in PMs in the past, but basically you're a top tier writer for a variety of reasons. Your characterizations and situations are always well done. My main disconnect is that I'm interested in adrenaline spikes and moments of high tension, where your stories usually focus ...
by Executionus
Wed Dec 28, 2022 5:58 am
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Re: Winter Holiday Contest 2022: Snow Maiden's March

I added a neat banner in my signature for this story in the style that I did for the ROA contest, which I think I'm going to start doing for all of my stories from now on (always linking to the most recent). What drove me to do something like that for this particular story was the fact that this thi...
by Executionus
Fri Dec 30, 2022 7:49 pm
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Re: Dare Me - The Lost Swimsuit Saga (new part 12/29)

Finally got all caught up on every story after falling way behind on reading in December (which is normal for me). This side saga is fun so far, and Mikey has definitely realized how much he can get away with now that they are far away from anyone who knows them. There's a ton of elements already se...
by Executionus
Fri Dec 30, 2022 8:15 pm
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Re: Kendall's Embarassing Encounter (New part 12/26)

Look, I don't know what they put in that pool water to turn all four girls completely ravenous. I'm just saying we should start bottling it.
by Executionus
Fri Dec 30, 2022 11:09 pm
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Re: The Smash Bet (Complete)

Jennifer definitely deserved it. Cheesy projectile bitch. :lol: I'm nowhere close to "good" at Smash specifically, but every modern fighting game ever made has some way to rush projectile spammers. Smash non-item projectiles aren't even that good (I grew up surviving hadukens and freeze s...
by Executionus
Wed Jan 04, 2023 12:48 am
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Re: Camping With Carter

Poor Carter hasn't yet figured out that the only hunter nearby who wants to devour him is the one right next to him the entire time.
by Executionus
Fri Jan 06, 2023 2:45 am
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Re: Halo Night At My Boyfriend's House

Always happy to plant a seed which grows into a flower of a story!

Also I love the detail that the first sentence of this story is just Jennifer admitting "I make bad decisions". Sets the tone well.
by Executionus
Sat Jan 07, 2023 4:58 am
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Re: Halo Night At My Boyfriend's House

I don’t play shooty games. Maybe I would if I could play a character with cute, pink armor and a rainbow gun. https://gifimage.net/wp-content/uploads/2018/04/overwatch-dva-gif.gif I think Kyle's shirt has a Zelda on it. It's a cute little blonde boy wearing a big blue shield. This girl plays Smash ...